前程百利2015-06-19最新更新GMAT作文机经
Q1. Smartpro
【本月原始】
V1
回来发现作文就是5月JJ里面第11篇Accounting software,我看5月总结的已经很充实了……好像没有变
V2
是smart pro 软件那一篇,寂静上有!而且还是我还恰巧练过(狗主就从寂静里挑了两篇练手了,就遇上了orz
【考古原题】
From GMAT AWA 最新题库 - 2010
The following appeared in a memorandum to a team developing accounting software for SmartPro Software, Inc.:
“Currently, more professional accountants use SmartPro accounting software than any other brand. However, in the market for personal accounting software for non-professionals to use in preparing their income tax returns, many of our competitors are outselling us. In surveys, our professional customers repeatedly say that they have chosen SmartPro Software because our most sophisticated software products include more advanced special features than competing brands. Therefore, the most effective way for us to increase sales of our personal accounting software for home users would clearly be to add the advanced special features that our professional software products currently offer.”
【参考思路】
1. 错误比较:他家的产品收专业人士欢迎是因为符合用户需求,the fact that competitor’s product is more popular with homeuser may contribute to the good user experience, integrated function, or beautiful user interface.
2. 无根据假设:把专业产品加到homeuser的软件中去一定能提高销量吗?用户可能因为功能太多,操作不便捷等原因不使用Smartpro的专业产品。
3. 因果关系:提高销量的办法不止是扩大使用群体,还可能是降价增加竞争力,研发多元化的产品等。
Q2. 毕业生开生物公司
【本月原始】
V1
考到了5月份机经22,强烈建议最近考得同胞们不要放弃以前的作文机经啊!!! 以前真的总结的很全面啊!!换库也会碰到啊!!!
说一个cell phone manufacuring 要用到一些 expensive metal, such as gold.... 但是 during past decade, the prices of those metal 一会儿夸张的章一会儿夸张的跌。这个cell phone producer说他们手机的销量会在未来持续增长,所以为了lock profits, 他打算一次性购入一大批expensive metal that their product line requires. 这么做的话,他们未来的利润就有保障了!
攻击点很多。。思路可以参考5月份的机经
【考古】
一个创业家做演讲游说 Z 市市政府,说 biotechnology company 对城市的经济有很大帮助,但是biotechnology company 需要很好的 lab 的条件。隔壁的 M 市就资助了很好的 lab,吸引某某大学的 graduate 留下创业。曾经有一个 biotech company 创立的非常成功。但是后来 M 市取消了这个资助。这个创业家认为这是好机会 Z 市赶紧资助 lab, 来吸引 graduate 来创业。
BY anaiswxy
recommendation:zaneville city council to provide financial support to martinton university graduates, attract them to open bio-company in the town
support: 1) biotechnology需要新技术新研发,能够给当地带来经济效益;
2) martinton univ graduates started a successful company in laboratories, BUT CLOSED afterwards.
狗主找的理由有:
zaneville 不一定适合发展biotechnology, 可能地理环境,经济发展侧重不一样 blabla; 2) 投资biotechnology不一定带来经济效益, capital input in construction, R&D, operation maintenance有可能赔钱;
martinton univ grads 开的公司最后关了除了经济因素还有其他原因,比如无法商业化,application不好,mass production不好,management, business strategy不成熟等等。。。
【参考思路】
一个创业家做演讲游说 Z 市市政府,说 biotechnology company 对城市的经济有很大帮助,但是biotechnology company 需要很好的 lab 的条件。隔壁的 M 市就资助了很好的 lab,吸引某某大学的 graduate 留下创业。曾经有一个 biotech company 创立的非常成功。但是后来 M 市取消了这个资助。这个创业家认为这是好机会 Z 市赶紧资助 lab, 来吸引 graduate 来创业。
BY anaiswxy
recommendation:zaneville city council to provide financial support to martinton university graduates, attract them to open bio-company in the town
support: 1) biotechnology需要新技术新研发,能够给当地带来经济效益;
2) martinton univ graduates started a successful company in laboratories, BUT CLOSED afterwards.
狗主找的理由有:
zaneville 不一定适合发展biotechnology, 可能地理环境,经济发展侧重不一样 blabla; 2) 投资biotechnology不一定带来经济效益, capital input in construction, R&D, operation maintenance有可能赔钱;
martinton univ grads 开的公司最后关了除了经济因素还有其他原因,比如无法商业化,application不好,mass production不好,management, business strategy不成熟等等
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