百利天下2016-05-19更新GMAT作文机经
22.投资房产
本月原始
有个房地产的brochure 说根据过去五年的数据来看 股市收益不好。买房子才能升值，
鼓励大家都买房。不难 有经济常识的都很好写。
考古
V1一个地产经纪的brochure 说房价过去五年一直在涨 股市在跌 因此投资房
市是最好的选择 而且买房后自己住还同时享受了投资 投资股市却没有同样的享受。
V2 Over the last five years, the housing prices in our city have doubled. During the
same time, the stock market has declined. So now it is a good time for the city residents to buy
houses as an investment. In additional, home owners can also live in the houses they bought and
that can improve one's quality of life, whereas there is no such similar benefit if one buys stocks.
就是real estate agent推荐resident买房，认为是一种比股票要好的投资方式，理由：**过去
五年数据表示投资房地产比投资股票利润高**买房能提高居民生活质量。
V1a real estate agent mentioned the below:
"Over the last five years, the housing prices in our city have doubled. During the same time, the
stock market has fallen. So now it is a good time for the city residents to buy houses as an
investment. In additional, home owners can also live in the houses they bought and that can
improve one's quality of life, whereas there is no such similar benefit if one buys stocks."
23.柑橘价格
本月原始
讲一个地方过去10 年里的某水果价格一直升高，而这10 年只有一年不利于该水果(好
像是lemon)种植的天气状况(狗主没搞清前后是不是一种水果..AWA 目测要崩)，所以
作者说这个price increase 是种植者故意搞上去的!要加强监管，抑制grower 这种行
为。
考古原题 (OG13第91)
The following is taken from an editorial in a local newspaper:
"Over the past decade, the price per pound of citrus fruit has increased substantially.
Eleven years ago, Megamart charged 15 cents a pound for lemons, but today it commonly
charges over a dollar a pound. In only one of these last 11 years was the weather
unfavorable for growing citrus crops. Evidently, then, citrus growers have been
responsible for the excessive increase in the price of citrus fruit, and strict pricing
regulations are needed to prevent them from continuing to inflate prices."
Discuss how well reasoned ... etc.
参考思路
1. Causal oversimplification：天气并不是唯一影响因素，比如环境保护，加工价格上
升，人力成本上升，或者通货膨胀，Monetary inflation, increased distribution and labor
costs, or alterations in supply and demand conditions the growers’desire for increased
profits.
2. 充分条件: Only way to combat increased price is through government intervention.
3. 无关假设：天气好 果树的产量一定高。因为种植柑橘的农民已经动用了可用的
资源了，产量无法再多
4. 错误类别 or Hasty generalization：柠檬是不是可以橘类水果类比，或者说，柠檬
有其特殊性，譬如柠檬都是进口的，比较贵。
24.information system
作文题目是，公司经理说，员工的效率越高，公司的profit margins 越高，所以我们要把钱
投入到information system，让电脑去完成大部分工作，以便提高工作效率。
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