本文为大家带来的是2015年5月16曰雅思写作真题回忆与解析,又一次雅思考试过去了,考生们不管发挥的怎么样,一定不能放弃哦,坚持就是胜利。
Task 1 flow chart
The diagram shows the stages of processing cocoa beans.

分析:
5月是流程图高峰,本月第二场雅思考试流程图如约而至,难度中等。注意被动语态的使用。
范文:
The flow chart illustrates how to process cocoa beans into different products.
It is clear that there are three stages in this process, from the initial whole beans to the final products on the market.
At the first stage, the whole beans are picked from the cacao tree. After being picked, their outer shells are removed and they are dried for the next stage. Stage two consists of many steps. On the one hand, some of the dried beans are processed into coca cake, and then in the next stage,*****/theses cakes(不确定是蛋糕还是其他单词,所以星号代替)are ground into cocoa powder and cocoa liquor, which are the raw material for making a variety of cakes and drinks. On the other hand, other beans would be mixed with sugar to produce industrial chocolate.
Finally,these finished chocolate would be sold to the consumer. (word count 154)
Task 2议论文
题目:
To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
话题:教育
题型:双边讨论
分析:
文章结构:4段
首段:导入话题,表达立场
主体段1: the positive effects of evaluating and criticizing teachers on the quality of education
主体段2: the negative effects of evaluating and criticizing teachers in the classroom
结尾段:重述要点,表明立场
范文:
Nowadays, whether evaluating and criticizing teachers should be supported in the classroom has become a controversial issue. From my perspective, evaluation and criticism of teachers are necessary for the improvement of education if they are objective and reasonable.
On the one hand, proposing changes to teachers' lesson content contributes to the improvement of teaching quality. Usually, it is difficult for teachers to realize the mistakes and slips in their teaching unless students remind them. Additionally, teachers may not clearly know what students have known and want to know when planning their lessons. If students can put forward their ideas and suggestions towards the lesson, it would be of great help for teachers to upgrade the teaching projects. Moreover, trying to evaluate teachers1 lesson is particularly beneficial for students1 academic and career development in the future. The modern education emphasizes criticism and innovation. Undoubtedly, it is an effective way for students to debate or discuss with teachers.
On the other hand, the disruptive students will probably disturb the class and negatively affect both teaching and learning outcomes. When students voice their opinions in the classroom, it will be hard to maintain the order and discipline and the teachers may feel disrespected. Also, students will suffer a loss in terms of knowledge and other learning content. This is because teachers always devote much to delivering knowledge and explaining theories. If they are disrupted, the teaching plan may not be able to be fulfilled. As a result, both teachers and students have to face a loss in the quality of education.
To sum up, it can be recommended that students evaluate and criticize teachers in the classroom on the premise that they have decent manners without disturbing the learning atmosphere. Only in this way will teachers and students achieve a win-win outcome in education.
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