本文为大家带来的是2015年7月4日雅思写作真题回忆,不管是参加本次雅思考试还是打算参加下一次的考生,不要忽视每一次的考题回顾,通过真题回忆,我们能看出最近的考试题型,考生才会心中有把握,更好的备考。那就和前程百利小编看看详细内容吧!希望对你有所帮助。
Task 1
题目:
The bar chart below shows the percentage of boys and girls aged 5-14 in Australia in who participate in various activities during two-week period.

分析:
小作文是柱状图。柱状图要注意数字的归类,这个图应该是前两个activities归一类,因为都是户外。注意不要男女分开写,要注意比较。
注意:题目中的TV其实应该是DVD,感谢考生的考情回顾。
范文:
The bar chart compares the popularity of different activities amongst children aged 5-14 by gender within two weeks in Australia.
We can see from the bar chart that children prefer indoor activities than outdoor sports. Watching DVD seems to be children’s favorite choice because almost everyone enjoys it. 81% of boys like plying electronic computer games, compared to 62% in girls,group. In the category of cycling,the percentage of boys is still higher than girls' The gender gap in the skating boarding is the smallest. Only roughly 5 per cent of girls take part in the skateboarding. Arts and crafts is the only group (about 20%) that more girls enjoy this activity.
To sum up, it is obvious that boys are far more likely to participate in a variety of activities than girls.
Task 2
题目类别:
社会类
提问方式:
利弊判断
考试题目:
It is suggested that all the young adults should undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Does it bring more benefits or drawbacks to the community and a young people?
分析:
题目的类型属于一种观点里的利弊判断。话题类别属于社会类。这个问题中提到了两方面,既有young people也有community,因此,在主体段中最好两方面都要有提及。
范文主体思路分析:
论点:利大于弊
利:
对年轻人:能学到技能,有助于在职场更好地发挥;还能增加对社区的归属感
对社区:能省下一笔钱做更多的事使社区变得更好。
弊:
对年轻人:会占用时间,影响学业
对社区:会面临组织的困难
范文:
In recent years, it has become more and more common for societies to encourage young people to do unpaid work in the local community. In my view,the voluntary participation of youth brings more benefits to young people and community.
By doing unpaid work,young people can gain experience and exercise skills, which are helpful for their performance in the future career life. For instance,when they work with others and interact with people,they can enhance their abilities of problem solving, communication and teamwork. Also,young people will feel a sense of belonging to the local community through voluntary work,building unity and reducing distrust among members of community: To communities,with the help of young people,they can reduce the financial burden of the community. If communities employ professional workers to do the same work,a high cost certainly occurs. But now, local councils can do more in other aspects like updating sport facilities or supporting disabled people, with the saving money.
Despite those merits of voluntary work,there are some potential drawbacks. Unpaid work might occupy a lot of time, which will lead to an obvious decrease in their learning efficiency in school or workplace. Besides,how to organize young people to work systematically is still a problem to local communities. Communities should avoid potential conflicts since these young people come from different social backgrounds.
From the above discussion, young people should be encouraged to do unpaid work since community service is good for youngsters’ future career life. Meanwhile, communities can save money to do something more beneficial to local community construction. However, there are still some negative points such as wasting time for young people and hard organization for community.
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