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TASK 1
题目:2007年与2009年英国一城市里人们上网主要参加的活动对比。

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分析:
此次小作文考察的为柱状图。虽然属于动态图,但只有两个时间点,只需对比2007年和2009年间 的数据。同时也要进行横向间对比,即上网活动的对比。那么在写作过程中要注意时态,两个时间点都为过去的时间。
范文:(word count: 170)
The bar chart compares the online activities people chose to do in a UK city in two particular years: 2007 and 2009.
It is clear that in the year 2007,a comparatively large percentage of people used the Internet for some practical purposes: with the largest proportion of netizens using the internet for shopping (approximately 43%), then next is to buy books with 38%, followed by booking and learning. By contrast, a small proportion of people used the Internet for entertainment, constituting 25% (with video games and TV representing 15% and 10% respectively).
In comparison, most of the activities attracted a larger rate of people in 2009, whereas shopping for books and learning experienced a marginal decrease,each accounting for 30% and 25%. In contrast, a significant growth can be seen in the calories of shopping, booking and watching TV, rising by around 10%.
Overall, the chart suggests that in the year 2009 online shopping was still the most popular online activity, while more people used the Internet for entertainment.
Task 2
题目类型:
社会类
提问方式:
利弊型
考试题目:
Many students are taught to push themselves to try and be better than other students, rather than work together for everyone’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
分析:
文章结构类似AD类,首段提出个人观点,本文观点弊大于利。主体段讨论其利弊时,可从 解决问题独立性与压力健康等问题思考,进行展开。最后一段重申观点,总结全文。
参考范文:(word count: 288 )
It is common that we are living in a world filled with sever competition in both businesses and individuals, even in those who study at schools. Personally, I think the merits do not necessarily outweigh the demerits.
There are two benefits of developing students,habit of competing with each other. Firstly, establishing a competitive environment is able to enormously motivate students of all levels to keep learning and working hard in order to keep up with peers and achieve more goals. In other words, this prevents ordinary students from giving up on themselves and makes them realize that being competitive is a quality that is capable of building up their perseverance. Furthermore, it is undeniable that competitive awareness can cultivate students to improve their problem-solving skills through coping with continuous challenges alone. Specifically, they are more likely to make great attempts to figure out problems in more effective ways rather than wait for others to find solutions.
When it comes to drawbacks, we cannot ignore the fact that cooperation plays an extremely imperative role in students’ whole life. Those who do not know how to cooperate may find it difficult to adapt to working environment in the future,for one-man team is less appreciated in a large number of firms. Another perceived disadvantage is that enormous competition has the possibility for students to accumulate more pressure, especially for those who are not good at dealing with stress, contributing to insomnia or other health issues. Therefore, it can negatively affect their learning attitudes.
In conclusion, although encouraging students to be competitive is beneficial for their academic studies and surrounding adaptability, it could become demerits when teachers only emphasize on teaching competition and ignore the impact of cooperation.
以上就是2016年6月4日雅思写作真题回忆的详细内容,希望对大家的备考有所帮助,也希望考生都能取得一个满意的雅思成绩。
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