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雅思小作文写作模式(三)

信息来源:网络  发布时间:2012-02-29

  阅卷考官经常是不会看那些图表的,因此文章必须逻辑清晰,如果描述得能令人在脑海里勾画出那个data chart,这篇task1无疑会达到8分的水平。开篇的第一句话可以是一句高度概括性的introduction(当然开门见山直接描述也是一种写法);这样做不仅使文章更趋于完美,而且可以达到凑字数的目的(但不要照抄题目,除非时间相当紧迫)。接下来另起一段开始进行描述(根据实际情况1-2段),这当中经常要连续使用非限定性定于从句,从而使得描述过程流畅、清晰。最后也可再另起一段进行简短的综述(并非必须)。上述的任何一个步骤都要遵循依据现有data进行客观描述的原则,任何推测性或议论性的内容写得再多、再精彩不仅不会加分,而且还会成为扣分的因素。
 

  二、data的具体表达法
 

  data在某一个时间段固定不变:fixed in time

  在一系列的时间段中转变:changes over time

  持续变化的data在不同情况下:

  增加:increase / raise / rise / go up ...

  减少:decrease / grow down / drop / fall ...

  波动:fluctuate / rebound / undulate / wave ...

  稳定:remain stable / stabilize / level off ...

  最常用的两种表达法:

  动词 + 副词形式(Verb+Adverb form)

  形容词 + 名词形式(Adjective+Noun form)

  1. Verb+Adverb form

  The number of XXX

  +increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuate...

  +insignificantly/significantly/slightly/suddenly/rapidly/dramatically/sharply/steeply/steadily/gradually/slowly...

  +from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

  2. Adjective+Noun form

  There was a (very) sudden/rapid/dramatic/significant/sharp/steep/steady/gradual/slow/slight

  +increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluctuation (注意:上述很多词不可用于修饰fluctuation)

  +in the number of XXX from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

  描述稳定的data:

  The number of XXX remained steady/stable from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

  The number of XXX stayed the same from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

  There was little change / hardly any change / no change in the number of XXX from from (第一时间) to (第二时间) / between (第一时间) and (第二时间)

  描述不同状态的data

  Noun form:

  steady drop / sharp rise peak / dramatic fall / sharp drop

  Verbal form:

  (to) bottom out / (to) reach the bottom / (to) increase gradually / (to) reach a plateau / (to) remain steady

  描述the highest point以及the lowest point

  高点极值:

  The monthly profit / The figures / The situation ...

  +peaked in (月份/年) <准确时间点用at XXX> at XXX% / XXX(极点data)

  或者reached a peak / a high point at XXX% / XXX(极点data)

  低点极值:

  XXX bottomed out / reached

  +rock / the bottom / a low point

  或者hit a trough

  此外,在描述过程中还有很多的conjunctional words/sentences,最常用的固定搭配如下:

  并列: as well as(句首/中), also, as well(句尾), either, neither, too, moreover, furthermore, in addition, additionally, besides, what's more, apart from ...

  举例: for example, for instance, to illustrate, as an illustration, in particular, particularly, especially

  事实: as a matter of fact, in fact, actually, as long as, so long as ...

  雷同/近似:similarly, likewise(句首/尾), at the same time, equally ...

  转折: however, whereas, nevertheless, nonetheless, though, although, even though, while, yet, on the contrary, contrarily, in contrast, conversely, on the other hand, unlikely, in stead (of), in spite of, despite of ... 


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