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雅思写作开头示例解析

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  对于一篇作文来说,一个好的开头可以达到事半功倍的效果,本文就雅思写作开头示例做解析,对于失败和成功的例子。
 

  废话连篇不知所云是雅思写作常见的失败开头之一
 

  典型的失败案例:Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
 

  This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
 

  修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题
 

  In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.
 

  Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)
 

  Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.
 

  Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
 

  Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
 

  相信通过上文的对比,大家可以比较出哪种写法更优,也希望大家能够认真的备考,找出更好地写作方法。
 

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