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需要避免的雅思写作开头模式

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  对于雅思写作而言,开头的重要性毋庸置疑,而实际上有几类雅思写作开头需要我们注意规避,为此小编特收集整理需规避雅思写作开头模式,分享给大家,下面和小编一起来看看吧:
 

  需规避雅思写作开头模式一:中式英文 人见人晕(喷血指数:☆☆☆☆☆)
 

  典型失败案例:Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
 

  In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily...
 

  Topic 2- The population problem
 

  The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
 

  Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
 

  I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things...
 

  Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
 

  Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.
 

  需规避雅思写作开头模式二:废话连篇不知所云(喷血指数:☆☆☆)
 

  典型失败案例: Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
 

  This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married...
 

  修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题
 

  In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.
 

  Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)
 

  Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.
 

  Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
 

  Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
 

  以上即是需要避免的雅思写作开头模式的介绍,希望大家能够关注,更好的备考雅思写作。最后,祝大家考出满意的雅思成绩,更多出国考试信息请继续关注百利天下雅思频道!
 

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