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雅思写作语言提升方法五大点

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  今天小编为大家带来的是关于雅思写作语言提升方法的内容,如何提升一篇雅思写作的语言?用词和句型是非常重要的,如果整篇雅思写作的句型和用词运用太过简单,或者太过单一的话,是不可能获得雅思写作高分的。
 

  一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。
 

  1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语,这个技巧并不是那么容易掌握,但是确实是一个能够提高雅思写组成绩的非常实用的技巧。
 

  例如:
 

  Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
 

  Revision: The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
 

  Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
 

  2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。
 

  例如:
 

  1) Weak: The team members are good players.
 

  Revision: The team members play well.
 

  2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.
 

  Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
 

  3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。
 

  例如:
 

  1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion.
 

  Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.
 

  2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.
 

  Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.
 

  二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。这样的具体描写可以让文章看起来更具说服力,当然也就可以提高雅思写作成绩了。
 

  例如:
 

  1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.
 

  Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
 

  2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.
 

  Better: She compares prices and quality.
 

  三、尽量运用主动语态。之所以要这样做,是因为很多人不明白什么时候该用主动,什么时候该用被动。用错了,当然也就谈不上提高雅思写作成绩了。
 

  例如:
 

  1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.
 

  Better: Charity has supported the organization.
 

  2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
 

  Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
 

  四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。想要提高雅思写作成绩就得使写作的用词简单,生动。
 

  例如:
 

  1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
 

  Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
 

  2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
 

  Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
 

  3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
 

  Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
 

  4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
 

  Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
 

  五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。这是语言考试,不是专业考试,提高雅思写作成绩的关键点在语言上,是文章的表现力上!
 

  例如:
 

  1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
 

  Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.
 

  2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
 

  Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.
 

  以上五点就是雅思写作语言提升方法的技巧,大家在自己的平时的雅思写作备考中可以对此加以应用,以便使自己的写作成绩得到提高。希望大家能熟练掌握,最后,预祝大家考出满意的雅思成绩!更多信息请继续关注前程百利雅思频道,或咨询400-890-6000,我们将会第一时间为大家带来更多雅思考试信息!
 

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