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雅思大作文开头段/结尾段的多种写法

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  想要取得雅思写作高分,大作文开头段与结尾段也是考生不容忽视的一点。今天,前程百利小编就为大家分享雅思大作文开头段/结尾段的多种写法,希望对考生们有所帮助。

  例题:Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

  Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

  1.引人入胜

  The heating debate of whether change always plays a positive role in life is of vital interest to many people in contemporary society.

  Whether we spend our lives in a changing way or not has been a long-running topic that triggers a very contentious / controversial discussion.

  引人入胜即提到这个题目被讨论的广泛性,吸引考官胃口。

  核心单词词组:

  be of great concern / importance / significance to…

  of + adj.+ n.

  contentious issue / question / topic

  The question of……has been widely debated in the world of 某学科. / is a matter of much contention among the general public.

  2.放眼世界(背景)

  Over the last half century the pace of change in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations. This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis. (背景)

  This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it. (暗提观点)

  放眼世界其实就是全局观、历史观的体现,核心词组:

  Over the past…years, with the rapid development of… In contemporary society, …

  Recent decades have witnessed an increase awareness of…

  Recent decades have witnessed a major transformation in…

  With the unprecedented rush / expansion / explosion of…

  unparalleled unsurpassed incomparable

  Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

  Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

  With the rapid development of sports career in recent years, successful sports professionals can gain much more salaries than those in other realms / fields. And this fact has aroused a heated discussion on whether……

  The thought-provoking phenomenon of celebrities in sports field can obtain much more money than other people in indispensable occupations has aroused our social concern.

  3.力排众议(回应题目)

  Some people strongly hold that it is vital to remain stable and avoid change in daily life. It is undeniable that change may lead to insecure feelings and busy schedules which can make us uncomfortable; (陈述某些观点的合理性)However, I believe that only with change can we keep pace to the ever energetic world and enjoy our life to the uttermost.

  力排众议需要满足:

  1、自己的观点比较新颖,与大众观点不一致;

  2、中间有一句最好能够承认大众观点的合理性(让步):admittedly, It is undeniable that……

  Although many people subscribe to the belief that……, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. From my point of view, ……

  It is now universally (widely) accepted that…

  4.兼收并蓄

  Some people hold the opinion that…, whereas others who are not so convinced present the counterargument that……is what I most appreciated.

  In my opinion, both sides of the argument have their own reasons, and we need a detailed analysis to get to the root of this controversy.

  兼收并蓄属于“老好人”的类型,适合折衷。

  结尾段写法:

  1.揭示本质

  In conclusion, the crux of the matter seems to be that change can be stimulating and energizing for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all change, including that which is imposed on people, does not necessarily have good outcomes.

  2.谏言献策 (主体段没能充分展开)

  In sum, (重述论点). But in order to do things in a changeable and innovative way, we should not forget to see anything in a broader and more reasonable perspective.

  3.展望未来:(可以适用于问题解决型作文)

  To sum up, I hold the view that……(重述观点). Personally speaking, if the current trend of……is allowed to continue, I envision a future when…….

  If…, my prediction about…is that…

  4. 结尾需要注意的事项:

  a. 不要喊口号,不要用祈使句;如Let’s build a harmonious society! *

  b. 必须重述观点,或将观点进行深化。

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