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雅思作文题目：
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
范文：
The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000.
Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purposes and this increased dramatically from about 500 km3 to around 3.000 km3 in the year 2000. Water used in the industrial and domestic sectors also increased, but consumption was minimal until mid-century. From 1950 onwards, industrial use grew steadily to just over 1,000 km3, while domestic use rose more slowly to only 300 km3, both far below the levels of consumption by agriculture.
The table illustrates the differences in agricultural consumption in some areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land In Brazil (26,500 km2) with that In the D.R.C (100 km2). This means that a huge amount of water is used in agriculture in Brazil, and this is reflected in the figures for water consumption per person: 359 m3 compared with only 8 m3 in Congo. With a population of 176 million, the figures for Brazil indicate how high agricultural water consumption can be in some countries.
一、题目类型：
混合图=1线+1表
二、题目简要内容：
线图-全球水资源使用领域;表格图-巴西和刚果2000人均水消费情况
三、关注点：
水资源消费
四、素材积累：
amount of… …的数量
large quantity of… 大量的
dramatically急剧地
五、论据积累：
三条曲线的变化趋势大致相同，都是不断上升的，不同之处在于上升的幅度不同。
人均水资源消费两个国家有很明显的差异。
六、结构分析：
分析：
第一段：
主要介绍曲线图的主要信息(时间段及研究对象):The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed (对题目中information about water use worldwide的改写)between 1900 and 2000.
第二段：
通过曲线的变化(changes)与比较(comparison)的方法相结合来描述曲线图的主要趋势： 1.(按照上升幅度的大小顺序来写。先描写用水量最大，上升幅度也最大的曲线--农业用水，指出起点和终点。)Throughout the century, the largest quantity of water was used for agricultural purposes and this increased dramatically(急剧地) from about 500 km³ to around 3.000 km³ in the year 2000. 2. 然后描述增长量较少的工业用水和家庭用水：Water used in the industrial and domestic sectors also increased, but consumption was minimal until mid-century. 3. 接着，指出1950年之前变化很小，之后各自分别增长到的相应用水量：From 1950 onwards, industrial use grew steadily to just over 1,000 km³, 4. 最后简单比较两者和农业用水的区别：while domestic use rose more slowly to only 300 km³, both far below the levels of consumption by agriculture.
第三段：
第三段描述的是表格内容。体现了巴西和刚果在水的消费方面的差异。
对比方式指出巴西与刚果的水资源消费情况：The table illustrates the differences in agricultural consumption in some areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land In Brazil (26,500 km²) with that in the D.R.C (100 km²). 下面，具体细化到Irrigated land(灌溉地面积)和Water consumption per person(人均耗水量)：This means that a huge amount of water is used in agriculture in Brazil, and this is reflected in the figures for water consumption per person: 359 m³ compared with only 8 m³ in Congo. With a population of 176 million, the figures for Brazil indicate how high agricultural water consumption can be in some countries.
本题由两种不同的图表组成：曲线图和表格。两个图表之间没有什么内在的联系，不用在结尾对进行对比分析。
参考译文：
曲线图显示了1900至2000年间世界范围内水的使用情况。
在这一百年里，农业用水量最大，从最初的500立方米急剧增加到2000年的3000立方米左右。工业和家庭用水量也有增长，但直到20世纪中期消耗量都很低。1950年以后，工业用水逐渐增长到1000立方米左右，而家庭用水增长更慢，只到300立方米。两者都远远低于农业用水量。
表格通过对巴西灌溉地面积(2650平方公里)和民主刚果共和国灌溉地面积(100平方公立)进行对比， 描述了世界上一些地区农业消费的差异。这意味着巴西农业用水量很大，这一点从人均耗水量为359立方 米可以看出，而民主刚果只有8立方米。巴西人口达1亿7600万，它的相关数据表明在一些国家农业用水量很大。
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