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雅思写作知识点系列之观点比较类

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2015-05-25

  备考雅思写作需要考生投入一定的时间与精力,对于每个知识点都要牢记。今天,前程百利小编为大家带来的是雅思写作知识点系列之观点比较类,希望对考生有所帮助。

  观点比较类题目—般会根据一个话题提供两种截然相反的观点。考生要在比较二者优缺点的基础上,明确提出自己的主张,即哪一种观点更好。这是雅思写作考通经常出现的出题方式,也是其他各类型作文的基础。该类型考题相对比较容易写,但对考生也有一定要求。比如,很多考生由于正反观点都论述,容易出现没有个人论点的情况,导致两边倒,中心不突出,从而影响考试得分。另外,受时间和篇幅限制,容易出现两边都论述得不透彻的情况,最终难以拿到高分。

  下面通过对一个例题的详细解析和几个练习题范文的学习,帮助考生掌握“观点对比类” 作文的写法。

  例题1:

  You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

  Write about the following topic :

  Some people like to eat at food stands or restaurants, while other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Discuss both sides and decide where you would choose to eat.

  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

  Write at least 250 words.

  本题就“在哪里吃饭”这个话题提供了两个选项,即“在餐馆吃饭”或“在家吃饭“。 考生要比较这两个选项,并清楚地表示自己是喜欢前者还是后者。

  雅思Task 2作文的结构,一般来讲会包括三个部分,即开头部分,中间部分和结尾部分。 开头部分主要介绍话题的背景,介绍相关观点尤其是考生本人的观点:结尾部分用于总结全文内容,重述考试观点;中间部分的篇幅最大,考生主要在这部分对自己的观点加以论证。 我们现在根据下面的例题1来学习这三个部分的写法。

  一、范文与解析:

  People's opinions differ with regard to whether they prefer going to eat at restaurants or cooking by themselves at home. After considering several aspects of the issue, I am convinced that restaurants arc the better choice of the two.

  Eating at restaurants has an evident advantage over cooking at home: it saves time, which too often is equal to money. After a long day,s exhausting work, cooking at home becomes, arguably, the most horrible thing to ordinary people. To accomplish this task, they need to carry out a number of sub-tasks, including buying materials, preparing them, cooking and serving, which are not only difficult to carry out but also consume a lot of precious time. Restaurants, on the other hand, have well-trained staff, who are able to provide us with an agreeable meal with the upmost efficiency. All we have to do are to wait,to enjoy and to pay the bill.

  As different restaurants are owned and run by different people, the foods they serve are of various tastes, which ensures that our choices are seldom limited. Take the city I live in, Beijing, for example. As the capital of China, this city has restaurants run by people from all over die country, and thus the features of different places are represented on their menus. People preferring spicy food arc welcomed to Sichuan-flavor restaurants,and people favoring noodles are always satisfied in a Shanxi restaurants. In comparison, however talented my wife is at cooking, she is unable to serve, among many others* Italian food, which is handy at the restaurant just down our apartment.

  While those who choose to eat at home do have a point in their concern about the health problem with eating out, this problem is problem is not completely hopeless. Well-famed restaurants often serve clean, healthy food» and many of them even invite consumers to supervise their kitchen. The governments are also implementing more strict regulations to protect the rights of consumers. Therefore, eating outside might not be as unhealthy as before, but will remain a convenient and enjoyable J experience.

  Both sides considered, I choose to eat at restaurants as they provide timely and diverse food without threatening my health. But those ill-famed restaurants are clearly never on my list of visits.

  作者首先用一句“就哪里吃饭而言,人们观点不尽相同”从而引出话題,然后用一句套套话“在思考了该问題的各个方面之后,我认为…“ 清楚地表明了自己的观点,即“在餐馆吃饭比较好“。 此处需要强调的是,考生要尽可能明确观点,避免采取中立的立场,尤其不要只论述两方观点,却迟迟不表明本人态度。在考官的思路里,中立等用于思想的匮乏,观点不明确无异于缺乏自信。

  作者在中间部分使用了三个分论点来支持自己的选择,每个分论点写作一段,这也是常见的写作方法。

  作者首先提到和在家做饭相比,在餐馆吃饭会比较省时间。

  接着指出餐馆的食物种类比家里多得多。

  最后就餐馆的卫生问题发表观点,从餐馆自身和政府政策两个方面说明卫生问题是可以得到解决的。

  三个分论点中,前两个说的是在餐馆吃饭的有点,重点从正面说明在餐馆吃饭比在家好。后一个先是提到了在餐馆吃饭的缺点,然后努力证明这一缺点不再是严重的问题,这是从反面证明在餐馆吃饭是可行的。

  如果考生想在第三个分论点中从反而征明在餐馆吃饭的可行性,还可以指出在家吃饭的缺点。比如,考生可以论证在家做饭也不一定健康。因为家人做饭时往往并不清楚哪些食材搭配最合适,而餐倌的厨师却懂得这些知识“。

  当然,更直接,也更简单单的方法,就是考生的三个分论点趣是从正面证在餐馆吃饭的优点:前两点分別是“省时用",”食物种类多“,第三点就可以说”更健康“或者”更适合工作了 一天之后放松身心“,等等。

  作者用“在餐馆吃饭省时间,饭菜种类多, 又卫生” 一句读就概括了上面三个段落的分论点,从而达到了总结的作用,结尾句排除了“名声不好的餐馆“,也让论证变得更加严密。

  二、模板

  由例题1,我们可以为观点比较类题目设计如下一个模板。

  开头: People’s ideas differ with regard to the question that…Some people believe观点一, while others disagree by arguing 观点二 . Personally, I share similar opinions with the former / the latter (because...)

  中间段一 :观点一 has an obvious advantage over 观点二 because...

  中间段二: Another reason underpinning my choice over 观点一is…. (中间段三可以有多种变化,例如下面a、b、c、d四种情况〉

  中间段三a : An often overlooked merit of 观点一is... (正面论证现点一的优点)

  中间段三 b : Although some may argue that 现点二 is preferable as it... they seem to forget the fact that...(通过指出观点二的缺点,反衬出观点一的优点)

  中间段三c:I have to admit 观点一 does have one problem, that is…but it is compensated by that fact that…(承认观点一存在问题,但是强调该问题与优点相比微不足道)

  中间段三 d: I have to admit 观点一does have one problem that is... but观点二 is never a better choice since...(承认观点一存在问题,但强调观点二问题更大)

  结 尾: From what has been discussed, one can easily reach the conclusion that (in spite of some minor problems,) 观点一is the belter choice of the two.

  三、使用模板完成如下题目:

  You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

  Write about the following topic :

  Some people prefer to buy things on line white others enjoying visiting real stores. Discuss both preferences and decide which you prefer.

  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

  Write at least 250 words.

  People’s ideas differ with regard to the question that . Some people believe while others disagree by arguing . Personally, I share similar opinions with the (because ) has an obvious advantage over because . Another reason underpinning my choice over is .An often overlooked merit of is .From what has been discussed, one can easily reach the conclusion that (in spite of some minor problems) is the better choice of the two.

  请使用下面的模板再写一次文章的笫4段。

  Although some may argue that is preferable as it ,they seem to forget the fact that .

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