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剑桥雅思真题范文分析系列一

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2015-05-25

  本文为大家带来的是剑桥雅思真题范文分析系列一备考雅思的考生对于雅思真题一定要充分利用,并且学会分析范文并吸取精华,前程百利小编相信,你会收获颇丰。

  雅思作文题目:

  The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  范文:

  The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in Poverty in Australia in 1999.

  On average, 11% of all households, comprising(包含) almost two million people, were in this position. However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.

  Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of household with children,a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.

  Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).

  Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those without children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

  一、 题目类型:

  表格图-1个表

  二、 题目简要内容:

  澳大利亚1999年贫困家庭的种类

  三、 关注点:

  贫困家庭

  四、 结构分析:

  表格图段落结构安排:

  引言段:

  用一两句话,改写题目,说出该图的事项、地点、时间。

  正文段:

  通过分析表格横纵分类标准,确定分类方法,逐条描述表格内容,注意有效数字的分析。

  结论段:

  用一两句话总结图形中的最大特点或者总体特点,避免与引言部分重复。

  具体分析:

  引言段:

  The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who were living in Poverty in Australia in 1999.

  breakdown:n. 故障;崩溃;分解;分类;衰弱;跺脚曳步舞。在本文中,该词意为分类。

  正文段:

  1)总说all households所占比例以及人数,1999年澳大利亚生活在贫困中的各类家

  庭比例高达11%,覆盖一百八十三万七千人。

  On average, 11% of all households, comprising(包含) almost two million people, were in this position.

  on average:平均;普通,通常

  comprising(包含) almost two million people 为插入语

  2)通过图表,我们可以按照不同性质进行分组比较。

  sole parent和single, no children;couple, no children和couple with children;

  single aged person和aged couple

  (1)However, those consisting of only one parent or a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and 19% respectively.

  only one parent =sole parent

  a single adult=single, no children

  (2)Couples generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levels for couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It is noticeable that for both types of household with children,a higher than average proportion were living in poverty at this time.

  better off:adj. 经济状况好的,富裕的;状况好的

  with复合结构修饰前一句话,无孩子夫妇的贫困比例要低于有孩子夫妇的贫困比例

  It is noticeable that:值得注意的是

  (3)Older people were generally less likely to be poor, though once again the trend favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people (6%).

  be likely to倾向于,很有可能

  though表示让步

  elderly couples= aged couple

  single elderly people =single aged person

  favoured:favour vt. 赞成;喜爱;有助于,此句中表示趋势偏向于老年夫妇,而单一的老年人所占比例并没有老年夫妇所占比例高。

  3)总结

  Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those without children were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting of couples.

  突出表格内容中的特点。

  单亲家庭和没有孩子的单身者所占比例最高,有孩子的夫妇、没有孩子的夫妇比重较低。

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