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极好的雅思大作文之社会类素材

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2015-05-25

  雅思大作文对于每个备考雅思考试的考生来说有一定的难度,然而也会有很多考生取得高分。这就需要考生要投入更多的精力去准备。今天,前程百利小编为大家带来的是极好的雅思大作文之社会类素材,希望对考生有所帮助。

  Task 2: (社会生活类)

  Nowadays, men and women in many countries decide to have babies at an older age. What are the reasons? What effects does this trend have on society and family life?

  一、分析题目:

  从题目中我们可以得知,有三个人物需要考生完成。不过通过第一句话我们可以得知一个事实,即men and women in many countries decide to have babies at an older age 在许多国家人们决定晚育。针对这一现象,考生的任务为Task 1 : What are the reasons;Task 2 : the effects on society ;Task 3 : the effects on family life。

  二、分析题目之后,考生可以进行文章结构的构思,我们可以把文章写成4段。

  首段:改写题目,叙述题目核心内容

  主体段 1 : the reasons why people are having children late in life

  主体段 2:the positive effect of this phenomenon on society and family

  主体段 3:the negative effects of this phenomenon on society and family

  结尾段:总结上文

  三、逐一分析所需完成的任务:

  Why :

  1. People spend longer time receiving education. In many developing countries many people only received school-level education and got married early (even before twenty).

  2. Increasingly fierce competition in the workplace/job market also pushes people to spend more time on work, and thus delaying their timeline of raising a family.

  3. Higher cost of living in the city also means people will have to work longer than in the past so as to save up enough for a normal family life.

  4. Last but not least, people’s attitude toward marriage and family is changing.

  …

  丰富内容:

  1)People spend longer time receiving education. In many developing countries many people only received school-level education and got married early (even before twenty). But now, most people would go beyond school level. A bachelor degree can never satisfy them as many people pursue Ph.D or even post-doctorate education. Under such circumstances, it is only logical/natural that late marriage becomes common and people have babies late.

  2)Increasingly fierce competition in the workplace/job market also pushes people to spend more time on work, and thus delaying their timeline of raising a family. In this context, young people would always put work on top of their priorities and consequently it is natural that…

  3)Higher cost of living in the city also means people will have to work longer than in the past so as to save up enough for a normal family life. For instance, in China, most people would prefer to take care of their own apartment and mortgage before they get ready for babies. Unfortunately, the property prices are so high that it normally takes them about ten years to do that, hence the late marriage and delayed/older parenthood.

  4)Last but not least, people’s attitude toward marriage and family is changing. Decades ago in my country the philosophy was that people should get married early and have children early. That way, they could have a happy life especially when “four generations live under the same roof”. However, young people want more freedom so that they can embark on journeys of self-discovery, or whatever it is one does when not surrounded by diapers and toys.

  Effects on society

  In the long term/run, there will be labour shortage…

  fertility rates/the population replacement rate drops…

  not be sufficient young workers in the job market…

  Effects on family

  reduce the number of baby births

  reach the desired number of offspring

  smaller family structure tend to spoil their children particularly in material ways

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