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雅思作文题目：
The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.(剑4 test3 task1)
范文：
The chart gives information about post-school qualification in terms of the different levels of further education reached by men and women in Australia in 1999.
We can see immediately that there were substantial differences in the proportion of men and women at different levels. The biggest gender difference is at the lowest post-school level, where 90% of those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men, compared with only 10% of women. By contrast, more women held undergraduate diploma (70%) and marginally more women reached Bachelor’s degree level (55%).
At the higher level of education of education, men with postgraduate diplomas clearly outnumbered their female counterparts (70% and 30%, respectively), and also constituted 60% of Master’s graduates.
Thus we can see that more men than women hold qualifications at the lower and higher levels of education, while more women reach undergraduate diploma level than men. The gender difference is smallest at the level of Bachelor’s degree, however.
一、题目类型：
柱状图-1个
二、题目简要内容：
澳大利亚在1999年学位证书等级以及男女所占比例
三、关注点：
教育-学位
四、素材积累：
通过题目，我们要了解什么是post-school qualifications，也就是指中学毕业后取得的资历，各个学历文凭所对应的中英文，我们能准确的认识。从低到高： skilled vocational diploma-职业技术文凭，undergraduate diploma-本科文凭，Bachelor’s degree-学士学位，postgraduate diploma-研究生文凭以及Master’s degree-硕士学位。
五、论据积累：
雅思小作文的写作关键是要明确分析图表中所示信息，用数据说明各个项目所占比例。
六、结构分析：
整体：
1. 本题为柱状图作文写作。横坐标为百分比，纵坐标为不同层次的中学后资历(职业技术文凭、本科文凭、学士学位、研究生文凭和硕士学位)。此外，每根资历男性和女性分别各为一根柱。
2. 数据描述要突出最值，我们可以分组进行比较(所占比例)，skilled vocational diploma：男女性差异最大，undergraduate diploma和Bachelor’s degree：女性大于男性，postgraduate diploma和Master’s degree：男性大于女性。
篇章分析：
首段：
改写题目：The chart gives information about post-school qualification in terms of the different levels of further education reached by men and women in Australia in 1999. (提供了时间、地点和研究对象等重要基本信息。)
in terms of 在…方面
第二段：
开头指出柱状图的最重要的特征，即男女在获得不同资历的比例上存在很大差异：We can see immediately that there were substantial differences in the proportion of men and women at different levels.
然后按照获得资历的从低到高的顺序进行描写，先写最低级别的，指出这个级别上男女差异最大，分别是90%和10%。：The biggest gender difference is at the lowest post-school level, where 90% of those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men, compared with only 10% of women.
通过对比，指出在接下来的本科文凭和学士学位上，女性比男性的比例要高。By contrast, more women held undergraduate diploma (70%) and marginally more women reached Bachelor’s degree level (55%).
1)substantial adj. 大量的;实质的
2)in the proportion of 按…的比例
3)where引导定语从句，指最大性别差异之处
4)compared非谓语，把男性与女性相对比
5)By contrast相比之下
6)marginally adv. 少量地
第三段：
指出在较高程度的教育上，不管是研究生文凭还是硕士学位文凭，男性明显多于女性(用数字说明)：At the higher level of education of education, men with postgraduate diplomas clearly outnumbered their female counterparts (70% and 30%, respectively), and also constituted 60% of Master’s graduates.
结尾：
总结，概括柱状图中的明显特点：
指出不管是在较低还是较高程度的教育方面，男性比例大于女性。Thus we can see that more men than women hold qualifications at the lower and higher levels of education,
而在获得本科文凭方面女性的比例要超过男性：while more women reach undergraduate diploma level than men.
在获得学士学位方面，男女差异最小：The gender difference is smallest at the level of Bachelor’s degree, however.
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