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很棒的雅思大作文之媒体类实例分析

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  雅思作文题目:

  Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.

  comics,books,radio,television,film,theatre

  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

  Write at least 250 words.

  范文:

  Of the six types of media listed above, three are to be chosen-- largely because of their being representative --to look at their advantages and disadvantages in relation to communicating information: books, radio and television.

  As the oldest media form, books are still of great influence in recording information and spreading knowledge. Almost all information in history and most information at present are stored and conveyed in books. However, in comparison with other technology-assisted media, books’ shortcomings are also apparent: they cannot sustain long-time storage and are comparatively lagging behind the time in delivering information.

  Radio might be one of the earliest technological media. Its biggest advantage lies in its convenience because of its portability. With radio, people may listen to the up-to-the-minute information anytime and anywhere only if the radio signal is available. Of course, people sometimes complain that with visual pictures, it would be much better, and which, as known to all, results in what we call TV set, rather than radio.

  In television, people see the best integration of both visual and acoustic effects. Furthermore, people more watch TV for leisure in addition to obtaining information because of the sensual enjoyment it provides. On the contrary, television has always been facing the fiercest criticism of its side-effect that information is delivered in such a passive way as to kill the audiences’ creativity.

  Agree with it or not, television is the most effective in communicating information. Currently, most households have TV set and some have even more than one. No other media parallels with it in terms of audience coverage. Besides, a big variety of information is available in television, such as news, documentary, music and movie, to meet preferences of different audiences. What is particular of television lies in its unmatched magic of live broadcast. Among others, these features suffice to draw the conclusion that television is the .most powerful in spreading information.

  一、话题类型:

  媒体类

  二、题目类型:

  观点类

  三、素材积累:

  communicating information 传播信息

  comics 漫画

  representative 典型的,有代表性的

  in relation to 关于,涉及

  store vt. 储存,储藏

  convey vt. 传达,传播

  in comparison with 与…比较,同…比较起来

  technology-assisted 有科技帮助/支持的

  comparatively 比较地,相当地

  lag behind 落后;拖欠

  lie in 在于…

  portability 轻便,可携带性

  up-to-the-minute 最新的,最近的

  only if 只要…就…

  in addition to 除…之外

  fierce 凶猛的,猛烈的

  side-effect 副作用

  四、论据积累:

  题目要求考生从中选择三种媒体形式对其优劣势进行分析,并指出你认为最有效的方式是什么。

  阐述各自优缺点的时候要进行原因论证以及解释说明,为什么最有效。

  五、结构分析:

  段落构造:

  五段式:

  第一段:指出书籍、广播和电视三种方式在交流信息方面最有效;

  第二段:指出书籍的优缺点;

  第三段:指出广播的优缺点(也是让步段);

  第四段:指出电视的优缺点;

  第五段:总结概括电视是最有效的方式

  逐一分析:

  第一段:

  第一段指出书籍、广播和电视三种方式在交流信息方面最有效,在句子上,使用了有一定复杂性的句型,还使用了插入语。

  Of the six types of media listed above, three are to be chosen-- largely because of their being representative --to look at their advantages and disadvantages in relation to communicating information: books, radio and television.

  of…介词短语

  representative 典型的,有代表性的

  in relation to 关于,涉及

  -- largely because of their being representative 为插入语

  句子结构有一定的复杂性,而非直接的写出是哪三种媒体。

  第二段:

  第二段直接写出主旨句,指出书籍作为这三种媒体里最古老的一种,仍然在记载信息和传播知识方面发挥重要作用:As the oldest media form, books are still of great influence in recording information and spreading knowledge.

  紧接着第二句话进行论证,表明历史上几乎所有信息和现代的绝大多数信息都是用书籍记载和传播的:Almost all information in history and most information at present are stored and conveyed in books.

  store vt. 储存,储藏

  convey vt. 传达,传播

  第三句话却运用转折词however指出书籍存在的弱点,即和其他技术先进的媒体相比,不耐储存,而且也难以做到同样的时效性。

  However, in comparison with other technology-assisted media, books’ shortcomings are also apparent: they cannot sustain long-time storage and are comparatively lagging behind the time in delivering information.

  in comparison with 与…比较,同…比较起来

  technology-assisted 有科技帮助/支持的

  comparatively 比较地,相当地

  lag behind 落后;拖欠

  第三段:

  第三段主要写广播作为媒体的优点:

  1)广播是较早的电子媒体。最大的优势就是便携:

  Radio might be one of the earliest technological media. Its biggest advantage lies in its convenience because of its portability.

  2)接下来用解释说明的论证手法,说明只要有信号,就可以随时随地获得信息:

  With radio, people may listen to the up-to-the-minute information anytime and anywhere only if the radio signal is available.

  3)紧接着,让步指出人们会有所抱怨,在于广播只能听得到声音,看不到图像。而有声音有图像的就是电视了。这一句话起到了承上启下的作用,从而引出下一段。

  Of course, people sometimes complain that with visual pictures, it would be much better, and which, as known to all, results in what we call TV set, rather than radio.

  lie in 在于…

  portability 轻便,可携带性

  up-to-the-minute 最新的,最近的

  only if 只要…就…

  available adj. 有效的,可得的;可利用的

  as known to all 众所周知

  第四段:

  1)第四段主旨句指出电视是视觉和听觉效果的最佳综合:

  In television, people see the best integration of both visual and acoustic effects.

  2)并进一步指出人们看电视经常是用来娱乐而不仅仅是获得信息:

  Furthermore, people more watch TV for leisure in addition to obtaining information because of the sensual enjoyment it provides.

  3)此外,指出过多的看电视会带来不利影响:可能会导致创造性萎缩:

  On the contrary, television has always been facing the fiercest criticism of its side-effect that information is delivered in such a passive way as to kill the audiences’ creativity.

  visual and acoustic 视觉的和听觉的

  in addition to 除…之外

  fierce 凶猛的,猛烈的

  side-effect 副作用

  结尾:

  1)总结了作者的主要观点,指出电视在传递信息方面是最有效的:

  Agree with it or not, television is the most effective in communicating information.

  2)并指出电视积极影响的体现,信息可以以各种各样的形式在电视节目中得以体现。Currently, most households have TV set and some have even more than one. No other media parallels with it in terms of audience coverage.

  parallel with 平行,与…比较

  in terms of 按照,依照,在…方面

  3)以及电视还可以进行实况转播:

  What is particular of television lies in its unmatched magic of live broadcast. Besides, a big variety of information is available in television, such as news, documentary, music and movie, to meet preferences of different audiences. unmatched无与伦比的

  documentary 纪录片

  meet 满足

  4) 最后一句话很好地总结了全文:电视在传播信息上是最强有力的。

  Among others, these features suffice to draw the conclusion that television is the most powerful in spreading information.

  suffice to 足以

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