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雅思大作文之"无脸化交易",你造吗?

信息来源:网络  发布时间:2015-06-05

  雅思大作文题材多样,这无疑是对考生增加了难度,因此考生要做好充足的准备方能应对。今天,前程百利小编为大家带来的是雅思大作文之“无脸化交易”,你造吗?

  现如今,科技与时俱进,科技类的话题也在雅思考试中受到了越来越多的重视。下面,就针对科技类话题进行实例分析。

  题目:

  It is now possible to perform everyday tasks such as banking, shopping and business transactions without meeting people face to face.

  What effects it may have on the individual and society as a whole?

  审题:

  通过题目可以得知关键词为:

  perform everyday tasks;

  without meeting people face to face;

  effects on the individual;

  effects on the society;

  题目要求:

  “无脸化交易”对个人以及社会会带来什么样的影响,包括积极的一面和消极的一面。

  那下面就对文章进行构思以及素材整理,希望对考生有所帮助。

  文章结构:

  开头段:改写题目,叙述主题

  第二段:阐述积极影响,包括对个人以及社会

  第三段:阐述消极影响,包括对个人以及社会

  结尾段:进行概括

  写作思路:

  积极影响:

  对个人:

  “无脸交易”可以带来更多便捷

  比如:

  1)轻击鼠标,货物上门;

  2)使用网上银行服务,而不用排队

  3)做生意更灵活

  对社会:

  1)整体工作效率有所提高

  2)总体生活质量有所提高

  素材放送:

  1) fulling tasks without face to face communication bring more convenience

  e.g.

  all can be done with a click of a mouse and goods will be delivered home;

  instead of waiting for a long queue, people are able to use self-banking services at home or get greater flexibility in doing their business;

  2) more and more can work remotely and thus efficiency of work and life quality is highly improved due to the technological advance in society.

  相关词汇和表达:

  完成perform = complete/ fulfill/ accomplish

  点击一下鼠标 a click of mouse

  递送 v. deliver sth.

  快递员a delivery boy

  而不是instead of + n./doing sth.

  队伍 / v. 排队queue

  灵活的adj. flexible

  灵活性n. flexibility

  远程地adv. remotely

  科技进步 technological advance

  消极影响

  对个人:

  网络安全问题:个人密码被盗/经济损失

  缺乏面对面交流:导致冷漠

  对社会:

  高度依赖会带来潜在的巨大风险

  比如,系统瘫痪所带来的危害

  素材放送:

  1)one of the biggest concern is the safety

  e.g.

  hackers can steal personal passwords from an insecure website;

  Internet frauds lead s to individual financial loss;

  people become indifferent due to the lack of face-to-face communication

  2) for society, a high dependence on this also brings a huge potential risk

  e.g. (虚拟)If the operating systems for the world finance, such as stock exchanges and banks were disabled, the results would be dire.

  相关词汇和表达:

  黑客hacker(s)

  网络诈骗internet fraud(s)

  冷漠的adj. indifferent

  瘫痪的/残疾的adj. disabled

  可怕的 adj. dire/terrible/horrible

  不安全的 adj. insecure

  财产损失property loss

  疏远的 adj. alienated

  残疾人 the disabled

  总之,备考雅思写作,考生要对各种题材有全年的认识以及了解,多多练习,多多积累素材,才能有所进步。

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