雅思大作文的备考需要考生多花心思,多练习写作,多积累素材才能逐渐提高雅思写作能力。今天,前程百利小编为大家带来的是雅思大作文五大常见错误,可供参考。
【第一名】:句子没说完。
例子:This is an important reason, other factors include high payment and long period.
解释:换主语时要么用句号或分号分开,要么用连词连接。
我们知道,英语里头有简单句和复杂句。简单句简单来说就是单头主语,复杂句则通过连词并列。所以上面那句,且不顾用词的失误,有三种正确的写法:
This is an important reason; other factors include high payment and long period. 分号
This is an important reason. Other factors include high payment and long period. 句号
This is an important reason, and other factors include high payment and long period. 连词
【第二名】:用禁词。
例子:always, definitely, certainly, undoubtedly.
解释:这些词大部分情况下不能用,而且据广大考生的一般水平,干脆就一概不用。为什么?因为你写的这可是议论文。你直接一个certainly+结论考官不是非常认可这种写法的。
换一种写法:
用Might, could, likely, not unlikely, potentially, conceivably, have reasons to believe.
总之就是全套的英式understatement, 让考官很无奈。
【第三名】:乱用代词。
例子:Educational achievements are strongly related to students' past activities. They are the cornerstone of future.
解释:上文的they指什么?不知道。
代词,简单来说,是讲名词很多时,用来替代名词用的。我们正常情况下应该尽量把那个词讲出来。对写作者来说很明白的指代,对读者来说一头雾水。考官看不懂,就直接当你这句写错了,你亏不亏?
写法:把代词写出来。
【第四名】:乱用副词。
例子:actually, quite, fairly.
I resolutely decide..
Conducting researches independently and individually SLOPPY
I became aware that current-day environmental problems are mostly multi-dimensional complication
解释:actually在多数中国考生看来很喜欢用或是各种副词,包括第二条中的禁词。
建议:干脆就一个都不要用,要用的话考生也要对使用的词有很好的掌握才行,否则只会总出笑话。
写法:总之,请在 actually 要用actually 的时候再用。
【第五名】:which
例子:Moreover, it provides workers with the extra time, WHICH is saved by the way to work place.
例子:Granted, it is commonly agreed that working at home brings to workers relaxation and pleasure mood WHICH may promote the efficient of working.
解释:中国学生的最爱!句式多样对他们来说就是定语从句;定语从句则只有一种,which。于是出现大量的像上面那样突兀多余的which,使读作文的人痛感意犹未尽。
写法:很简单,把which跟后面那个动词去了,上分词。 比如上文,
with the extra time, saved by....
pleasure mood, promoting...
以上就是雅思大作文五大常见错误的详细内容,希望广大考生如愿考出自己理想的雅思成绩,更多雅思备考经验我们将会陆续为大家更新,前程百利雅思考试频道不可错过!欢迎咨询我们的热线电话400-890-6000。
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