雅思小作文与大作文难易程度不同，考生要给与同样的重视。今天，前程百利小编为大家带来的是雅思柱状图7-7.5分范文解密，希望考生能够多多学习。
讲完了如何取得柱状图的6.5分，让我们在一起来看一下如何才能在柱状图中获得7-7.5的高分呢?
首先，还是让我们一起先来回顾一下雅思小作文的评分标准，知道这些标准我们才能对症下药，直重要害，取得高分。
雅思小作文之评分标准：
Task achievement (TA) (任务完成度):
Summarize the general features/trends (总结归纳数据的走势和主要特点)
Select important information (筛选重要信息)
Compare and contrast data (对比数据)
Cohesion and coherence (CC):
Whether the response has a suitable layout and logical ordering of points
(文章是否条理清晰，行文有逻辑)
Correct and appropriate use of connectives
(是否正确使用衔接词)
Lexical resources (LR):
Range and accuracy of vocabulary; (词汇丰富度和准确度)
The correct form and spelling of the words (词汇形式和拼写正确)
Grammatical range and accuracy (GRA):
The range and accuracy of tenses and sentence structure (时态和句式的丰富度和准确度)
综上所述，雅思小作文有四大评分标准，从任务完成度，衔接和逻辑，词汇，以及语法丰富度和正确度中做出了要求。也就是说，只有很好的达到了这四大要求，一篇作文才能获得高分。下面我们就从这四大方面，来分析一篇7-7.5分柱状图范文。
The graphs below show current rates of secondary and higher education among people in various parts of the world.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are two column graphs comparing the rates of secondary and tertiary education among males and females in various different parts of the world.
While Europe enjoys relatively high levels of education overall, it seems that people in less affluent regions are far less likely to be educated. All European girls of school age and 90 percent of boys receive a secondary education, compared with only 20 percent of girls and 10 percent of boys in Sub-Sahara Africa, Latin America and East Asia, meanwhile, have moderate levels of secondary education——between 40 and 50 for both sexes.
With regard to higher education, the figures are much lower throughout the world. In Europe, some 50 percent of adult females and 45 percent of adult males gain a higher education. Conversely, only 20 percent of females and 25 percent of males in Sub-Saharan Africa attend college or university. The figures for Latin America and East Asia are marginally higher than those of Africa.
Also noteworthy is the fact that females are more likely to receive a secondary education in all regions except East Asia, but less likely to receive a tertiary education in all regions except Europe.
(196 words)
下面我们就四大评分标准，来解密这篇7-7.5分范文。
Task achievement (TA):
上篇7-7.5的范文已经提到，这是一副纯静态的柱状图。那么达到这幅柱状图TA的7分以上标准，首先就是要找出总体趋势，即评分标准中的“summarize the general trend”，即data。和上篇6-6.5的范文类似，这篇7分范文作者同样第一眼也看到了这幅图的最主要的柱与柱之间的差距特点，即Europe在两幅图中多是最高点那一个，这次，作者写到“Europe enjoys relatively high levels of education overall”， 但是这还没有完，光看到了最高的那一个似乎还并不完整，紧接着，作者有写到“less affluent regions are far less likely to be educated”。因此，在此处，作者不仅highlight最高的那一个，还point out出来最低的那一个，同时将compare 和contrast the data 做到更深入。
但是这还并没有完，作者在很好的描述完单幅图中各数据的对比之后，也略带了提了一下图与图之间的对比。于是，在第三段的开头，我们看到了这样一句话“With regard to higher education, the figures are much lower throughout the world.” 这里的lower，显然是和上段的secondary education 对比的。也就是说，即使没有动态变化，作者也做到了图与图之间的对比。在这里，小编提醒广大烤鸭注意，如果想要获得7分甚至是更高的分数，那么文章中的compare and contrast data一定要全面且深入，即又要有图中的数据对比，也要go beyond this, 进行图与图之间的对比。
Cohesion and coherence (CC):
这篇范文在衔接与逻辑上也做到了思路清晰。和上篇6.5分的范文类似，作者也很自然的把两个层面的数据，就secondary level, 和higher education level分别进行描述，自然地分为了两段，可见英雄所见略同。因此，在这里在此提醒同学们注意，当只有静态描述的的时候，有几幅图就写几段。
另外，衔接词的使用也比6.5分范文更进一步。在段落中间，及段与段之间，作者都精准的用到了衔接词。如第二段中，表示句与句之间的逻辑衔接词：“while, compared, meanwhile”.以及短语段之间，如第三段开始的 “with regard to”等。
Lexical resources (LR):
本篇范文的词汇多样性也是其成为一篇7分范文的主要因素。和上篇6.5分范文相比，这篇文章的语言明显高达上很多。比如同样是描述 “拥有“的意思，6-6.5分范文写到”have”, 而此篇作者用到了”enjoy”。
Grammar range and accuracy (GRA):
这篇范文的语法结构多样也是使它获得高分的一个原因。作者灵活运用多种句式，展示了语法的多样性。如作者用到了比较状语从句“While Europe enjoys relatively high levels of education overall, it seems that people in less affluent regions are far less likely to be educated.”;比较状语“compared with only 20 percent of girls and 10 percent of boys in Sub-Sahara Africa”及插入语“——between 40 and 50 for both sexes”。以及同位语从句“Also noteworthy is the fact that females are more likely to receive a secondary education in all regions except East Asia, but less likely to receive a tertiary education in all regions except Europe.”。多样的句子结构也同时使文章更加紧凑。
现在，大家是否体会了如何写好一篇柱状图，获取7.5分的高分呢?
小编为你总结如下：
1. 柱状图的最主要数据分析应该是针对柱与柱之间的difference，但如果要得高分需更进一步，当多图出现，一定要点出图与图之间的差距。.
2. 句式多样性，能够灵活运用多种高分句式及语法现象。
3. 词汇的运用上，需要有一些亮点词汇。
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