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如何攻克雅思写作开头段从而增加亮点

信息来源:网络  发布时间:2015-06-13

  备考雅思写作考试,考生不仅仅要注意主体段落的写作,开头段也是非常关键的因素。那么如何攻克雅思写作开头段从而增加亮点呢?考生要做好全面的准备。

  面对同一个题目,不同的考生会写出不同角度的文章,自然也会有不同的结果。那么究竟哪种文章才可以获得高分呢?获得高分的文章大抵相同,其中最重要的一条就是开篇的方式,高分作文,从开头就开始吸引阅卷老师的眼睛,分分钟争分!

  让我们来下面这个例题和几篇例文的对比讲解来探讨下雅思写作的开头方式。

  题目如下:

  Throughout the history, male leaders often made the society more violent and conflicting. If women governed the world, it would be a more peaceful world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give an example to support your idea.

  不同的开篇方式例文,从简单到复杂,从低分到高分。

  模式一:

  3句式:rephrase the title + quote others' opinions + make one's own point clear

  用一个好的句式:Recently there has been a hot debate in the public over the issue whether the world would be more peace if women governed the world.

  用动词变化和连词连接观点: Some people believe that women would be better governors while other people couldn't agree.

  提出自己的观点,如果现在还没有明确的观点,可以虚晃一枪:I will analyze the two opinions and then give my own point of view.

  模式二:

  由于上面一篇文章并没有显示出创造性,所以容易被考官识破,只能得到5到5.5 分,实在是模板痕迹太过明显,所以可以考虑升级。

  可以从world governor 或者man/ woman作为切入点,避免直接谈到话题,而是“后退一步”从话题的部分内容中切入

  It's generally agreed that women are more considerate and patient than men. However, would the world be more peaceful if women were the governor of the world? Personally, I believe that women are better governors than men.

  Undoubtedly, women and men should be treated equally. However, when it comes to governing the world, it seems that most of the governors are males just as the word "history" indicates history is "his story", not "her story". In my point of view, women would make better governors if given the chance.

  模式三:

  可以考虑抛开背景知识,采用其他的开篇手法,虽然难度可能更大一点。

  At the mere mention of women governing the world, most of us may naturally form an unrealistic picture of a more peaceful world where the sun always shines. The other side of the picture, however, is just to the opposite.

  Have you ever considered why the world should be governed by males most of the time? Has it ever occurred to you that women might make more competent leaders and the world would be more peaceful under their leadership? I sincerely believe that women could at least make equally capable leaders as men if not better.

  Sometimes while looking back on the trip, one may find that seemingly the road has always been bumpy and muddy and sadly the driver has been a man most of the time. Some people may therefore come to a misunderstanding that it is the man driver who has made the voyage uncomfortable and even miserable. It is the same case when it comes to the human being's history. I sincerely believe that whether the society is more violent and conflicting may not have a close relationship with the gender of the leader.

  考生要了解自己的写作水平是处于哪个阶段,进而找出正确的方法来更好的备考雅思写作考试,才能达到自己的目标。

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