雅思大作文分类型来讲，大致涵盖了政府类，法律类，教育类..等八大类型话题，同一类话题的题目虽然不尽相同，但都有一些相似之处。今天我们就一同来探寻一下雅思大作文政府类范文解密吧。
首先，我们先一起来回顾一下雅思大作文的评分标准，一起来看一下如何对症下药才能让我们顺利地取得大作文高分。
和小作文相比，大作文的评分标准大致相同，分为了Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resources, Grammar Range and Accuracy. 其中，在后面的三项中，即Coherence and Cohesion , Lexical Resources, Grammar Range and Accuracy 中，评分项目都和小作文是一致的，在这里小编就不在赘述了。但是在task response中，和小作文的task achievement 有了一些不同。
在小作文中，task achievement 这一项评分标准，考官做出了如下解释：
Summarize the general features/trends (总结归纳数据的走势和主要特点)
Select important information (筛选重要信息)
Compare and contrast data(对比数据)
也就是说，要完成小作文的TA，必须要有趋势概括，信息筛选和数据对比的内容。
那么在大作文中，TR这一项，考官又给出了如下解释：
Task response:
Whether all parts of the task are addressed
Whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported.
也就是说，和小作文中的数据筛选，趋势概括和数据对比不同，要完成大作文的TR一定要完成题目要求，并且要给出清晰的扣题的观点，并进行论证。所以大作文的论证一定要充分并且有效。
那我们还是按照考官给出的评分标准，来一起探究一下下面这篇范文的高分之路。
The government should pay for people’s health care and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Health care and education are basic human rights and needs. Some people think that the government should pay for citizen’s health care and education. I partly agree with this view.
There are three main reasons why the government should pay for citizen’s medical and educational cost. Firstly, a large proportion of government revenue comes from the taxes paid by citizens. The government should reward taxpayers with health care and education. Secondly, international competition in economic and technological fields is fierce today. The educational and health levels of citizens are important factors influencing the competitiveness of a country’s workforce. By providing citizens with education and health care, the government helps to promote economic and technological development and increase the competitiveness of the workforce in the global economy. Thirdly, there are people who cannot afford basic health care or education in almost every country. If the government did not pay for their basic healthcare or education needs, they would feel that they are treated unfairly by the government, which would be a source of social unrest.
However, the government only has limited financial resource. If it spends too much money on health care and education, other important fields such as scientific research, infrastructure development and the pension system may be under-funded and underdeveloped. It is the responsibility of the government to keep a reasonable balance between the educational and healthcare needs of citizens and other financial needs that are also essential to economic growth and social development.
Overall, I believe that the government should provided free health care and education to citizens who cannot afford them. At the same time, it should encourage business to provide health insurance to their employees, and fund public schools with the property tax that local residents pay. These measures can help the government to keep its budget balanced and achieve more sustainable economic growth.
Task Response:
首先，我们一同来看一下这篇范文在TR的精彩表现：
Whether all parts of the task are addressed.
纵观题目，是要求考生就“政府应该为人们支付医疗与教育费用”这个论题上，给出自己的观点：多大程度上你同意或者不同意。
注意，这一类题目是问考生你同意的程度的，所以最好点出自己同意的程度。文章开头就给出自己的观点：partly agree，这是同意一部分。那么部分同意，就说明，作者是赞同，但又有一些反对这个观点的，也就是作者的观点进一步分为了两部分，即partly agree and partly disagree。那么在主体段，作者就需要对这两部分的观点分别进行论证。那么我们就清晰的看到，作者在主体段第一段对自己partly agree的观点进行论证。在主体段第二段，作者又对自己partly disgree的观点进行论证。全面的完成了写作任务，即all parts of the task are addressed.
这一点，也是很多考生会忽视的地方。很多考生在写这类题目时，也是写出了partly agree的观点，但是他们往往只针对自己agree的观点进行论证，而忽视了disagree的那一部分。
Whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported.
我们在来看看作者对于自己两个论点的论证情况。
首先，在论证partly agree的观点时，作者列举了3个原因来支撑自己的观点，即分别从纳税者，国家的竞争力及支付不起医药费及教育费的贫困民众3个角度来论证政府支付医疗费用及教育费的必要性。这也是作者支撑自己partly agree的3个分论点，。注意，作者并没有列举这三个论点就搁浅了。相反的，他进一步的论证这三个分论点。即主体段的展开是subtopic + supporting detail 的结构。
其次，在论证partly disagree的观点时，作者对政府应该支付医疗和教育费用这一观点又进行了反驳，即提出了分论点：政府的财政收入是有限的，因此应该平衡在教育和医疗上以及别的重要领域的支出平衡。并且对这一分论点也进行了进一步的论证，即也遵循了subtopic + supporting detail 的结构。
Cohesion and Coherence
这篇范文在连贯与衔接上也非常的精彩。全文适当的使用衔接词，将段之间，以及句之间的意思有效衔接起来，是文章条理清晰，逻辑流畅。例如，在主体段的第一，第二段之间，用了however，这样表示转折的衔接词，将支持和反驳的观点的论述以转折关系衔接起来。在段之间，句子之间的逻辑关系也非常清晰。例如在主体段第一段，作者列出了3个分论点，即3个为什么政府需要支付教育和医疗费用的原因。3个原因用firstly, secondly 和thirdly衔接，使论证调理清晰。
Lexical resources (LR)
这篇文章的词汇也是可圈可点。我们一起来总结一下作者在描述税收话题时用到的一些高分词汇：a large proportion of..表示很大比例的。 reward taxpayers with..用..来回报纳税人;fierce competition 激烈的竞争; the competitiveness of a country’s workforce,一个国家劳动力的竞争力;is a source of social unrest是一种导致社会动荡的因素;infrastructure development，基础设施的发展; sustainable economic growth具有可持续性的经济增长
Grammar range and accuracy (GRA)
文章的语法结构多样，使得句子非常的紧凑不松散。如用到了宾语从句：“Some people think that the government should pay for citizen’s health care and education.” 其中，that 引导的从句在主句中做宾语; 同位语从句：“There are three main reasons why the government should pay for citizen’s medical and educational cost.”其中，why引导了同位语从句，做reason的同位语。如用到了非谓语做定语：“The educational and health levels of citizens are important factors influencing the competitiveness of a country’s workforce.”，其中 “influencing..”现在分词结构做了factor定语。以及非谓语做方式状语：“By providing citizens with education and health care, the government helps to promote economic and technological development and increase the competitiveness of the workforce in the global economy.”，其中”by providing..”做了主句的方式状语。
Ok, 我们现在也一同总结一下大作文政府类的高分密码：
1. 观点论证要充分，主体段以subtopic + supporting detail的结构展开
2. 文章结构逻辑要流畅，使用逻辑衔接词衔接段落，以及段之间的论据。
3. 词汇要丰富，掌握政府类的高分词汇
4. 语法要准确多样，多应用高分句式，如名词性从句，非谓语等。
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