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雅思双边结构作文如何巧妙使用模板

信息来源:网络  发布时间:2015-06-29

  模板对于备考雅思写作考试的考生而言是非常好的宝贝,但考生要掌握正确的使用方法才会发挥其最大的功能,而不是全盘照抄。那么,写作考试中备考中,雅思双边结构作文如何巧妙使用模板呢?考生赶紧和前程百利小编一起来了解一下吧。

  1. 引言段

  引言段是通篇作文的开篇之作,对于它的写法多种多样。但是无论怎样书写,切忌出现以下模式性的语句样式:

  模板语言:

  Nowadays, the discussion about ……is a very controversial one. Those who criticize…. argue that…, but people who advocate…, on the other hand, maintain that…

  这样的模板相信大家不会陌生,它曾经受到无数考生的青睐。但是我们说过,这样过于机械的语言,很难体现出考生对考题文字的理解,更为糟糕的是,你的开头有可能和无数人是重复的!

  下面我们就做一个简单的对比:

  非模板语言:

  No matter in which country,children are,without any exception,regarded as the protected in society,not to mention making them involved in any forms of paid-work(调用背景知识,引出话题).The necessity of allowing them to make money with their own hands is indeed worth discussing(结合对考题文字的统一转换,自然流露双边讨论倾向)

  2. 主体段

  模板语言:

  1. The benefits of… can be perceived in many aspects.

  In the first place, 分论点一. For instance, 例证 / 语言论证。In the second place, 分论点二. 论证.

  2. However, ...has also given rise to a lot of problems.

  For one thing,...For another……, Finally,...

  在传统的模板里,双边结构的主体段只是简单地分段论证两方面的观点,虽然将两种对立观点展现的非常清晰,但是也难免落入模式化的俗套。

  做一个简单的对比:

  非模板语言:

  a. 让步分析

  Admittedly,hardship and bitterness of life could drive people to become mature. Under working pressure, children think about finishing their tasks before the deadline instead of concerning how to kill their seemingly limitless free time. Work may be the only priority of their life. It is fairly different between taking a dollar from their parents and earning one by themselves. Only the tough reality can force them to get rid of selfishness and dependence on their parents, which is exactly one of the most urgently needed cures in parental education.

  双边结构的一个重要特点就是双边论证两种观点,在这篇文章里可以先让步论证一个观点,这样可以为后一个观点的论证提供很好的对比。

  b. 转折过渡+提出观点

  However,everything is mixed blessing. Employing children to work should be viewed as a harsh treatment and abuse to them. Kids,after all,unlike adults,are immature both physically and psychologically. They are extremely vulnerable to both occupational hazards and social evils.

  以上就是雅思双边结构作文如何巧妙使用模板的详细内容,模板虽好,但要用之有道,否则只会给考官留下不好的印象,是抄来的,而不是自己所写的,当然分数也不会高。希望考生能够取得一个满意的雅思成绩,更多雅思备考经验我们将会陆续为大家更新

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