雅思写作考试题材多样,每种题材考生都要掌握其写作背景,写作技巧以及相关素材的积累才能攻破,取得高分。那么,针对抽象类作文考生是否做足准备了呢?下面,就和前程百利小编一起来探讨雅思大作文之没有职业上的成功,生活就没有意义?通过本文,希望考生能有所收获。
写作题目:
It is said that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
通过审题,我们可以抓住题目的核心内容,即工作很重要,没有职业上的成功,生活就没有意义。针对这个话题,考生是否同意并给出自己的观点。
拿到这个题目,我们要如何写作呢?我们来分析一下文章的结构划分,以及各个段落的大致内容。
文章结构:
开头段:介绍背景并给出个人观点;
第二段:论述职业成功具有重要意义;
第三段:论述除了职业成功外,还有其它因素同样对人生很重要;
结尾段:重述个人观点。
文章的四个段落比较清晰了,那么,在本文中,我们主要来看看主体段落要如何写作。
首先是第二段:
职业成功具有重要意义:
(1) 职业成功能够带来成就感或是得到重视;
(2) 职业成功能够带来经济独立,可以在社会上生存;
(3) 职业成功能够带来团队归属感。
相应素材:
(1) by achieving success in one's job, one can easily obtain a sense of fulfillment
或
by knowing that one's work is valued and one can contribute to the society
(2) the reward from one's work can bring financial independence which is essential to secure one's survival in modern society.
(3) a sense of belonging to a team or a working community is also generated while one works together with his colleagues towards the same goal.
a sense of fulfillment 成就感
financial independence 经济独立
a sense of belonging 归属感
generate vt. 使形成;发生
接下来是第三段:
其它因素同样对人生很重要
(1) 很多人很看重朋友、家人之间的亲密关系;
(2) 有一些人从宗教中寻求精神上的宁静和喜悦;
(3) 身体健康最重要;
相应素材:
(1) Some people might regard the intimate relationship between close friends and family members as the essential element of their life.
For them, a good relation is the source of power that can encourage them to overcome any difficulty in their life.
(2) Others find that religion brings them tranquility and comfort after a tiresome day which money or any material success cannot offer.
(3) Also, there are still many people who are fully convinced that a healthy body is equally vital in their lives.
intimate 亲密的
tranquility 宁静,平静
comfort 安慰,舒适
tiresome 烦人的
其他相关话题拓展练习:
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2)要不要立法限制工作时间?
3)医生护士老师是否应该比体育和娱乐界的明星收入更高?
4)很多人忙于工作,没有时间陪家人朋友,为什么? 会对家庭生活和社会造成什么影响?
5)要不要因为年龄而拒绝求职者?近年来工作条件发生了改变,为什么,人们如何准备未来的工作?
以上就是探讨雅思大作文之没有职业上的成功,生活就没有意义的详细内容,考生要想取得写作高分,不仅要掌握好的写作思路,好的素材,还要多加练习,只有真正动笔去写才会知道自己到底有哪些错误需要改正,才会有所进步。更多内容关注前程百利雅思考试频道,欢迎咨询我们的热线电话400-890-6000。
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