本文为大家带来的是十大常见雅思写作错误分析,考生在备考雅思写作考试过程中要学会思考,不断总结,不能一味的埋头于题海之中,是没有任何效果的。因此,我们一起来看看这十大错误都有哪些吧!
导致雅思写作分数低的因素有很多种,常见的原因主要有训练不得法,教师指导质量不高,语言技能弱等等。因此,考生想要提高雅思写作分数就不得不了解一些解决策略才行。
常犯的错误大致总结为以下方面:
一、不一致(disagreements)
雅思写作中的所谓不一致,不仅仅指主谓不一致,它还包括了数的不一致,时态不一致和代词不一致等。
When one have money, he can do what he want to.
(一旦人有了钱,他就能想干什么就干什么)
分析:
One是第三人称单数,因而本句的have应该改为has;同样,want应该改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为:Once one has money, he can do what he wants(to do).
二、修饰语错位(misplaced modifiers)
英语与汉语不同,同一修饰语置于句子不同的位置,句子含义可能引起变化。对于这点很多考生没有引起足够的重视,因而造成不必要的误解。比如:
I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
分析:
Better位置不当,应置于句末。
改为:I believe I can do it well and I will know the world outside the campus better.
三、句子不完整(sentence fragments)
在口语对话中,人们可以借助手势,语气,上下文等,使不完整的句子完全被理解。可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会使得句子意思不清。而这种情况往往发生在主句写完以后,考生又想加些补充说明时发生:
There are many ways to know the society. For example, by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.
分析:
本句后半部分“For example, by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.”不是一个完整的句子,仅为一些不连贯的词语,不能成为一个句子。
改为:There are many ways to know the society, for example, by TV, radio, newspaper.
四、悬垂修饰语(dangling modifiers)
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语和后面的短语逻辑关系不清,如:
1. At the age of ten, my grandfather died.
分析:
这句话“At the age of ten”只指出10岁时,但并没有指出谁10岁时,按照一般的推理不可能是“my grandfather”,如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确点,句子就不会引起别人误解了。
改为:When I was ten, my grandfather died.
2. To do well in college, good grades are essential.
分析:
句中不定式“To do well in college”逻辑主语不清。
改为:To do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五、词性误用(misuse of parts of speech)
分析认为,词性误用通常表现为:介词当动词用,形容词当副词用,名词当动词用等,如:
None can negative the importance of money.
分析:
Negative是形容词,误作动词使用。
改为:None can deny the importance of money.
六、指代不清(ambiguous reference of pronouns)
指代不清主要指代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或者先后使用的代词不一致,如:
1. Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to become her bridesmaid.
分析:
读完上面这句话后,作者无法明确判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象明确,意思就一目了然了。
改为:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to become her bridesmaid.
2. We can also know the society by serving it yourself.
分析:
句中代词we和反身代词yourself指代不一致。
改为:We can also know the society by serving it ourselves.
七、不间断句子(run-on sentences)
什么叫不间断句子,请看下面的例子:
There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析:
这个句子包含了2层完整的意思“There are many ways”以及“we get to know the outside world”,简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为:There are many ways for us to get to know the outside world.或者There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
八、措辞毛病(troubles in diction)
措辞是指在特定的句子中如何恰当地选用词语的问题,由于很多因素的制约,比如上课时间有限,老师在这方面作的指导相对来说就比较少,因此导致了学生在平时写作中没有养成良好的推敲,斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲,拿来就用。所以作文中措辞不当的地方比比皆是:
The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
(农业中不断增加的化学物质的使用也造成了污染)
分析:
显然,考生把“obstacles”“障碍物”当做“物质”来使用了,另外,“the increasing use”(不断增加的使用)应该改为“abusive use”(滥用)。
改为:The abusive use of chemical substance in agriculture also leads to pollution.
九、累赘(redundancy)
建议考生们在写作中语言以简洁为贵,写句子没有一个多余的词;写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组;能用词组的不用从句或者句子,如:
1. In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
分析:
本句中的“In spite of the fact that he is lazy”是同位语从句,按照我们上面说的能用词组不用从句。
改为:In spite of his laziness, I like him.
2. For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the things they need.
分析:
整个句子太罗嗦,可以大大简化:
改为:Diligent, caring people use money only to buy things they need.
十、综合性语言错误(comprehensive misusage)
所谓综合性语言错误是指在雅思写作中除了上述10种错误外的诸如时态,语态,标点符号,大小写等错误。如:
Today money to everyone is very importance, our’s cloths, live, eat, go etc.
分析:
“our”是人称代词的所有格形式,可以单独作形容词使用,没必要使用’s形式,而且后面应该跟名词。
改为:Today money to everyone is very important, for example, our eating, clothing, living, going ,etc.
以上就是十大常见雅思写作错误分析的详细内容,考生要深入了解,并通过练习写作去看自己是否会存在这样的错误再加以改进。祝愿考生能够取得满意的雅思成绩!

