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雅思写作思路大放送,助你一臂之力

信息来源:网络  发布时间:2015-07-11

  想要取得雅思写作  高分,考生就要在平时多积累一些写作素材,会对自己的写作带来很大的帮助。前程百利小编想要为大家奉上一些雅思写作思路大放送,助你一臂之力!

  一、如何对待罪犯

  1. criminals 应该be locked up in prison(jails).

  2. can ensure a safe and comfortable living environment for law-abiding citizens. Thieves ,robbers, rapists and murders are dangerous, pose potential threat to the society

  3. 放到监狱教育是一个很好的方式,让他们知道侵犯其他人的权利是要付出代价的,这样就会减少他们再次犯罪的可能性

  4.不但是punish criminals but also deters the potential criminals. 有些有犯罪倾向的人由于害怕被处罚,可能会放弃commit crime.

  5.应该放到监狱。Just as the old saying goes, mercy to the criminal may be cruelty to the people.

  二、彻底禁止吸烟

  1. 从经济方面,contribute much to government revenue,如果baned ,则会导致unemployment

  2. 从权利方面,Smoking just a hobby and amusement, 人们有权选择自己的 lifestyle

  3. 从健康方面,必须承认抽闲是detrimental to health,但是the harm is exaggerated.如果控制每天的吸烟量,不会对健康造成devastating problem. 而且还有relieve stress 和 calm down.历史上有一些伟人吸烟,毛泽东,邓小平,他们仍然enjoy long life expectancy.

  三、科技(电话,电脑)的利与弊

  1. On the positive side,

  (1) make life faster, easier and safer

  (2) the world is becoming smaller and closer, trains cars plains make possible to travel to distant places

  (3) modern communication tools,使人们更好的交流,与任何地方的人交流,特别使促进了business的发展

  (4) longer life expectancy由于progress of medical science

  (5) 电影电视made life enjoyable and colorful (6)计算机和Internet get information easier, make friends, business, tele-education

  2. On the negative side,

  (1) 机器的使用造成unemployment

  (2) 电话和互联网的使用alienate people from their friends 因为lack adequate face-to-face communication.

  (3) Children 缺乏essential interpersonal skills.Those who indulge in … often feel isolated and being cut off from the outside world, they tend to be more introverted, self-centered and with drawn.

  三、学习能力

  孩子和大人的学习能力

  1. 孩子学的快:比较单纯,在学校的环境中容易学习,语言,新事物(游戏,网络)

  2. 大人学的快,有方法和经验,而且具有一定的知识积累,所以在相关领域学的很快,但是busy with family and work ,可能没有足够的时间学习

  3. can not generalize about children or adults being better learners. It depends on the situation and motivation of a individual and the level of enthusiasm he or she has for learning.

  四、公共场合的监视器

  1. 安装监视器的优点:

  利用监视器可以帮助警察catch criminals, thus reducing crime. a camera is more effective than security guards.

  警察和保安不可能全天24小时工作,而camera will not feel tired.

  而且它更objective, sometimes our eyes might deceive us, while a machine can exactly record what happens, it can prevent much unnecessary embarrassment. Frighten off the criminals and reduce potential crime.

  2. 缺点:

  Critiques about installation of surveillance typically look at the infringement of people’s privacy.

  Being photographed and recorded by the camera,很多人feel uncomfortable and no privacy.特别是女性,有些人可能会将camera获得的资料用于illegal use.

  3. 尽管有缺点,但是为了public safety ,监视器是有必要的。但是应该尽可能balance the need for security with respect for individual’s privacy and freedom.

  五、明星是否该拿高薪

  1. 承认明星给人们带来pleasures,他们提供的娱乐使人们在工作之余放松,有一个健康的lifestyle.但是they are definitely overpaid.

  2. Wealth should be allocated according to the contribution to the society. 与明星相比,很多ordinary people在医学,教育和科研领域工作的人,对社会的贡献更大,但是他们的薪水要低很多。获得Nobel prize的科学家甚至都没有明星拿的多,这是inequitable。

  3. 虽然从事体育娱乐的明星也需要有skills and talents,但是其他’ordinary’ professions也require special skills,而且很多职业years of education and special training.这样的收入不公使得人们are doubtful of接受教育的作用,这对培养下一代是很不利的,他们可能会give up school study and pursue to get money much easier like the sports star.

  4. Things should be done to make salaries fairer. Government should impose heavy taxes upon 明星 who earn excessively high salaries, greater amount of money should be given to 贡献更大的公民who deserver the earning .

  以上就是雅思写作思路大放送,助你一臂之力的详细内容,考生不仅要积累,还要学会使用才是王道。希望考生能够考出满意的雅思成绩!更多雅思备考经验我们会继续为大家更新。

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