雅思大作文题材多样,考生要做好充分的准备方能攻破。今天,前程百利小编主要为大家带来的是深入剖析雅思社会类大作文之跳槽的利弊,考生要吃透范文中的每一个知识点,并多加练习,一定会有所进步。
雅思作文题目:
Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (OG test1 task2)
当看到这个题目时,我们可以很快的判断出此题题材属于社会类,题目类型属于讨论类。该题目讨论的是应该一直在一家公司工作还是应该换工作。题中给了两个角度的观点,考生要对两个方面分别进行讨论并给出自己的观点。
再了解完题目大概意思之后,考生就要思考写作思路了,要如何布局才会使文章的结构框架更好。因此,通过分析之后,我们可以把文章分为四段,即第一段交代背景信息,然后分段讨论两种观点的各自的优缺点,结尾段总结并明确提出自己的观点。
在论述的时候,考生可以适当的运用一些论证方法,比如,举例论证,让步论证,对比论证等,让文章更加有说服力。
下面,前程百利小编为大家奉上范文一篇,我们就来分析一下,这篇文章到底好在哪里吧。
范文如下:
For most people, when they get their first job they have little idea whether or not they will remain in the same organisation throughout their working life. If they decide to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall.
People who stay with the same organisation have the advantage of thoroughly understanding how it works and also becoming familiar with the staff and processes. If they work hard, their promotion prospects are good and there is likely to be greater job security, with the promise of a good pension when they retire. Employers value loyalty and may offer additional incentives to long-term employees, including bonuses and reward schemes.
However, one of the drawbacks of staying with the same organisation is that the person may get stuck doing the same job year after year. In some cases, this can lead to boredom and disillusionment. Moving from one organisation to another can be a strategic decision in order to have variety and acquire a range of skills and experience. A friend of my father started out as a sociology teacher, he then joined the Social Services and is currently managing a care home in Western Australia. This has made him incredibly knowledgeable in a range of related fields and, in my view, has provided him with a much more interesting working life.
Although there are benefits to working for one organisation, I feel that it is also valuable for an employee to be able to offer a wide range of experience having worked for different companies. As long as it is planned carefully, I feel that change is good and will ultimately benefit the employee and the employer.
具体分析:
第一段:改写题目,阐述主要内容。
For most people, when they get their first job they have little idea whether or not they will remain in the same organisation throughout their working life. If they decide to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall.
本段并没有直接给出自己的观点,而是提出这样一个背景,即一般人在刚找工作时并不知道他们是否会一直待在一家公司,如果要改变的话就要考虑一下后果。从而引出下文。
第二段:论述不换工作的优点。
1) 熟知公司运营情况,熟悉员工和工作流程:
People who stay with the same organisation have the advantage of thoroughly understanding how it works and also becoming familiar with the staff and processes.
2) 晋升机会多,有更好的工作保障和福利:
If they work hard, their promotion prospects are good and there is likely to be greater job security, with the promise of a good pension when they retire. (举例论证,老板会提供额外的奖励)Employers value loyalty and may offer additional incentives to long-term employees, including bonuses and reward schemes.
have the advantage of 胜过;处于...有利条件
be familiar with 熟悉
promotion prospects 晋升机会,升职机会
be likely to 倾向于,很有可能
incentives n. 激励;奖励
第三段:通过转折的方式指出不换工作的缺点。
1) 一直待在一家公司会导致思维僵化,有时也会感到无聊和幻灭:
However, one of the drawbacks of staying with the same organisation is that the person may get stuck doing the same job year after year. In some cases, this can lead to boredom and disillusionment.
2) 正面论证换工作的好处:
a. 掌握各种技能经验:
Moving from one organisation to another can be a strategic decision in order to have variety and acquire a range of skills and experience.
b. 接下来运用举例论证来进一步阐述:
A friend of my father started out as a sociology teacher, he then joined the Social Services and is currently managing a care home in Western Australia. This has made him incredibly knowledgeable in a range of related fields and, in my view, has provided him with a much more interesting working life.
one of the drawbacks of… 缺点之一为...
get stuck 被卡在...;被堵...
knowledgeable知识渊博的,有知识的;有见识的;聪明的
第四段:总结。
Although there are benefits to working for one organisation, I feel that it is also valuable for an employee to be able to offer a wide range of experience having worked for different companies. As long as it is planned carefully, I feel that change is good and will ultimately benefit the employee and the employer.
Although 表示让步,来总结第二段的主要观点,即不换工作存在好处。
I feel that… 我感觉...,我觉得...
As long as 只要
紧接着,提出作者本人观点,然后运用as long as表示递进,来说明只要合理规划的话,换工作对员工和雇主都有好处。
总而言之,在现实生活中,跳槽的现象屡出不鲜,很多人换了一个又一个,可仔细想一想,出现这种现象的原因也有很多,利弊各有说法,没有一个绝对的判定。也许这样的现象就发生在你身边,但是当我们用汉语去描述时很简单,用英语去论述的话就难一些了。因此,考生要在平时多多练习,不要为了学而学,要真正掌握运用英语的技能,才能为以后身处异国他乡的工作和学习带来帮助。
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