雅思小作文主要包括选址类与地理变迁类两大类型,考生要做好充足的准备工作才行。下面,让我们一起来深入剖析雅思小作文之地理变迁题高分范文,看看范文是如何写作的,我们又会从范文中学到什么呢?
今天给大家带来的雅思作文题目来自剑桥雅思官方指南中Test 7 Task 1的作文,原题目是The map below shows the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.

从题目可知,该题为地图题,主要有两张地图组成,属于地理变迁类。题目描述的是Stokeford村庄在1930年和2010年的发展变化。地理变迁题的写作,考生要根据时间以及空间顺序来写,小作文的写作还要格外注意时态与语态。
从图中得知,没有变化的是横跨河流的桥梁以及邮局的位置,而有所变化的是商店,农场没有了;新增几条支路以及很多住宅;花园被改建成了养老院;学校的规模也扩大了。因此,从变化中,我们在写主体段的时候可以分别描述这个村庄在1930年和2010年的发展变化较好写一些。
下面,我们来具体看看每个段落的详细内容以及进行分析。
第一段描写的是第一张地图的内容:
先整体描述在1930年,River Stoke贯穿了Stokeford村庄的东北角到西南角,地图上显示有一座桥,连接河流两岸地区。
In 1930, the River Stoke crossed through the Stokeford from northeast corner to southwest corner and a bridge in the top was over this river for providing the path for the road in this map.
下面,具体描述建筑以及设施:
1) 很显然,河流两岸没有任何建筑:
It is obvious that there is nothing in the west side of the river.
It is obvious that 显然…
2) 在河流东岸,小学正好在地图中心位置,旁边是一个农场:
Moving to the eastside of the River Stoke, the primary school was right in the center of the maps well as next to the farmland.
3) 小学的南边是花园,包括一个大房子:
To the south side of the primary school was the gardens with a large house.
4) 此外,沿着主干西边,从北到南,有一些建筑,比如商店,邮局和农场:
Besides, along the road from north to south, several buildings, shops, post office and farmland were located in the west side of it.
第二段主要描述的是第二幅图的内容,即70年后该村庄的发展变化。
1) 2010年,河流西部的邮局没有变化,但是农场和商店被拆除:
After 70 years, as can be seen from the map of 2010, there was no change happened in the west side of the river and about the post office, but all of the farmlands and shops had been demolished.
as can be seen from… 从..可看出…
demolish vt. 拆除;破坏;毁坏;推翻;驳倒
2) 小学增加了两栋楼,南边的花园被改建成了养老院:
Moreover, the primary school had been expanded with two buildings and to the south of which, the original gardens had been reduced and developed as the retirement home.
retirement home 养老院;老人院
结尾段强调了变化中比较明显的,即出现很多支路,并沿着支路增加了很多房子。
Lastly, several branches of the road had been constructed with plenty of houses, which had been established along branches.
素材积累:
there is no change happened in ...
... is right in the center of the maps well as next to ...
to the south side of... is...
along ... from north to south ... are located in the west side of...
to the south of which ...
... what have been established along ...
... have been demolished
... have been expanded with...
the original... have been reduced and developed as ...
several... have been constructed with ...
最后,小编将范文分享给大家,考生们可以参照学习学习。
In 1930, the River Stoke crossed through the Stokeford from northeast corner to southwest corner and a bridge in the top was over this river for providing the path for the road in this map. It is obvious that there is nothing in the west side of the river. Moving to the eastside of the river stoke, the primary school was right in the center of the maps well as next to the farmland. To the south side of the primary school was the gardens with a large house. Besides, along the road from north to south, several buildings, shops, post office and farmland were located in the west side of it.
After 70 years, as can be seen from the map of 2010, there was no change happened in the west side of the river and about the post office, but all of the farmlands and shops had been demolished. Moreover, the primary school had been expanded with two buildings and to the south of which, the original gardens had been reduced and developed as the retirement home.
Lastly, several branches of the road had been constructed with plenty of houses, which had been established along branches.
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