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雅思小作文之线图高分范文剖析

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2015-07-27

  备考雅思小作文线图考试,考生要学会分析图表,掌握写作技巧并不断练习,一定能够有所突破。下面,就和前程百利小编一起来了解雅思小作文之线图高分范文剖析,详细你会从中有所收获。

  本次想要为大家分享的是剑桥雅思官方指南Test 6 Task 1的作文,其作文题目为The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012.

  根据题目以及图可知,该题为线图,主要由三条线组成,分别是burglary(入室抢劫),car theft(盗车)以及robbery(人身抢劫)。由图可知,burglary曲线变化最为明显,其次是car theft,变化幅度最小的则是robbery,因此,考生在进行文章写作是,主体段可以把三条曲线分别描述,各自成段,这样写起来较为容易一些。

  分析之后,我们就来看一下各个段落的具体内容。

  第一段:改写题目,描写图表核心内容:

  原文:

  This graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Newport inner city during the period 2003-2012.

  接下来描写图表中较突出的信息:即入室盗窃曲线的变化最大,偷窃的发生率较低但比较稳定。

  We can see immediately that the greatest change occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidents of the remained low but steady.

  素材:

  shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city被替换成illustrates how crime rates altered in Newport inner city

  burglaries n. 盗窃,夜盗;盗窃行为

  第二段描写的是入室盗窃曲线的发展变化。

  原文:

  In 2003, we can see that burglary was the most common crime, with approximately 3400 reported cases. The figure rose to around 3700 in 2004, but then there was a downward trend until 2008. At this point the figure stood at just over 1000 incidents. This rose slightly in 2009, then continued to fluctuate for the remaining period.

  素材:

  we can see that 我们可以看到…

  downward trend 向下趋势,下跌趋势

  参考译文:

  我们可以看到,2003年入室盗窃是最常见的犯罪事件,已有大约3400起事件被报道。到2004年,这个数据上升到3700左右,但是之后就呈现下降趋势,直到2008年,大概是1000多起。到了2009年,有轻微幅度的上涨,在最后的几年里继续呈波动状态。

  第三段主要描述的是盗车曲线的变化情况。

  原文:

  In 2003, the number of cars being stolen stood at around 2800 and followed a similar trend to burglary until 2006. At this point the number rose, standing at around 2200 in 2007. There was a marginal decrease in the following year, but from then on, the trend was generally upwards.

  素材:

  marginal adj. 边缘的;临界的;末端的

  参考译文:

  2003年,大约2800起盗车事件被报道,直到2006年,其变化趋势和入室抢劫相似。到了2007年,盗车事件增多,在2007年有2200起。随后几年发生率略微降低,从那时起,趋势上升。

  第四段描写的是人身抢劫曲线的变化。

  原文:

  Finally, robbery has always been a fairly minor problem for Newport. The number of offences committed changed little over nine years. It is interesting to note that the figure of approximately 700 in 2003 is the same figure for 2012.

  素材:

  fairly adv. 相当地;公平地

  It is interesting to note that….有趣的是

  参考译文:

  最后,人身抢劫是纽波特地区一直是最小的问题。其犯罪率在这九年期间变化很小。有趣的是,在2003年大约有700起,这个数据与2012年的一样。

  总结:

  雅思小作文线图的描述,考生不能脱离图中信息,要根据图中具体数据进行分析每条曲线的变化情况。在写作时,把三条曲线各自划分为一段进行描写比较好。

  素材积累:

  犯罪率:

  crime rates

  reported cases

  the number of offences committed

  比较:

  the greatest change occurred in….

  …was the most common crime

  …has always been a fairly minor problem.

  趋势:

  remained low but steady...

  …and followed a similar trend to burglary until 2006.

  变化:

  The figure rose to...

  ...but then there was a downward trend until 2008.

  范文分享:

  This graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Newport inner city during the period 2003-2012. We can see immediately that the greatest change occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidents of the remained low but steady.

  In 2003, we can see that burglary was the most common crime, with approximately 3400 reported cases. The figure rose to around 3700 in 2004, but then there was a downward trend until 2008. At this point the figure stood at just over 1000 incidents. This rose slightly in 2009, then continued to fluctuate for the remaining period.

  In 2003, the number of cars being stolen stood at around 2800 and followed a similar trend to burglary until 2006. At this point the number rose, standing at around 2200 in 2007. There was a marginal decrease in the following year, but from then on, the trend was generally upwards.

  Finally, robbery has always been a fairly minor problem for Newport. The number of offences committed changed little over nine years. It is interesting to note that the figure of approximately 700 in 2003 is the same figure for 2012.

  以上就是雅思小作文之线图高分范文剖析的详细介绍,考生们要学会分析优秀范文精华,不仅仅要记在本子上,脑海里,关键是要学会学以致用才会有事半功倍的效果。希望考生朋友们考出满意雅思成绩,更多雅思备考经验我们将会陆续为大家更新,欢迎咨询我们的热线电话400-890-6000。

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