恰当运用词汇让你的雅思写作大放异彩,想要提高雅思写作分数,考生们就要做好充足的准备,这样才会有所成效。
(一) 形容词/副词的问题
形容词和副词方面的问题主要存在于三个方面:
一是词汇之间的修饰关系——形容词修饰名词,副词修饰动词、形容词或副词;
二是形容词、副词的比较级和最高级的问题;
三是这两类词汇使用的精确性的问题。
1、To begin with, it is obviously fact that there is amount of people in our country who cannot pay the fees of high education.
改正:obviously fact——an obvious fact;is amount——are a great number
译文:首先,我们国家许多人付不起大学学费,这是一个显而易见的事实。
解析:fact是可数名词单数,应该用形容词来修饰,并在前面加不定冠词a。
2、Frankly speaking, it is quite difficult to say that men and women ought to be treated complete equally in multifarious categories of jobs.
改正:complete equally——completely equally
译文:坦白地说,男女在工作的各个领域都能够受到平等对待,是很难的。
解析:副词equally应该由副词completely来修饰
3、For instance, an intelligent boss requires a carefully assistant so that all of the files will be dealt with properly.
改正:a carefully assistant——a careful assistant
译文:比如,一个明智的老板需要一位细心的助手,这样,所有的文档才能处理妥当。
解析:形容词修饰名词
4、They will not feel lonely and discrimination.
改正:discrimination——discriminated
译文:他们就不会感到孤独和歧视。
解析:feel是系动词,后面接and连接的形容词做表语。
(二) 介词的问题
介词是英语十大此类中的一类虚词,也称功能词,4句子在语法上保持正确性。介词虽小,功能巨大。
这个曾经许多语言专家认为不可译、不可对的对联可以充分说明介词的重要性:
“上联: 去中国买瓷器,中国有瓷器,吃饭靠瓷器。
To China for china, China with china, dinner on china.
下联:到前门买前门,前门没前门,后门有前门。
Go front door buy front door, front door no front door, behind door with front door”。
由此可见,You cannot be more careful in using prepositions when you are writing in English.
1、When chatting with someone who is abroad with the Internet you can save a lot of money.
改正:with the internet——on/via the internet
译文:通过网络与在国外的人聊天,你可以节省很多钱。
解析:“通过”网络,是一种方式,而with+一种工具
2、Except studying in the school, children can learn to live and also feel the hardships of their parents at work. Children doing paid work is more good than harm.
改正:Except——Besides;Children——Children’s;is more good than harm——has more good than harm
译文:除了在学校学习以外,孩子们能够学会生存并且理解父母在工作中的艰辛。孩子做有偿工作利大于弊。
解析:“除了……”,在这里是包括学校学习在内;而except是“排除在外”;Children doing paid work应该是具有名词特征的短语,所以在Children后面加’s。
3、A majority of people stand the point that college students should pay for their tuition fees.
改正:stand the point——stand on the point
译文:多数人认为,大学生应该自己付学费。
解析:stand是不及物动词,应加上介词on,后面再加宾语。
4、If the government provides them of enough support to pay for full tuition fees, they will gain chances to enter universities.
改正:provides them of enough support——provides them with enough support
译文:如果政府为他们支付所有学费提供足够的帮助,他们将会获得读大学的机会。
解析:provide sb. with sth.=provide sth. for sb. 给某人提供某物
5、Such as the argument of who should pay for the tuition fees.
改正:the argument of——the argument about
译文:比如关于谁应该付学费的争议。
解析:“关于……的争论”,用介词about
(三) 连词的问题
连词在语法中被分为两种:并列连词(连接两个或两个以上的简单句以构成并列句)和从属连词(连接两个或两个以上的简单句以构成主从复合句)。
例如:
1、However, there are also quiet a few people hold the opinion that college students should pay for their tuition fees.
改正:However, there are also quiet a few people——However, there are also quiet a few people who
译文:然而,也有许多人认为大学生应该自己付学费。
解析:句子是由三个句子构成的,其中there are……是主句,hold the opinion是定语从句,而that college students should pay for their tuition fees是宾语从句(含有基本的主语、谓语结构),所以应该给hold前面加上主语who以代替前面的quiet a few people。
2、It goes without saying that it can guarantee the equality of higher educational, it is a reasonable practice.
改正:it is——and it is
译文:毋庸置疑,这可以保证高等教育的公平性,也是合理的做法。
解析:两个分句中间不含有任何的连词就存在于一个句中,这是不合理的。根据前后之间的并列关系,中间加and。
3、In addition, the government can make economic reforms to colleges is that schools pay students to do community service around colleges.
改正:is that——, which is that
译文:此外,政府可以针对大学进行改革,即学校付钱给学生在学校附近进行社区服务。
解析:is that本身是一个主语+系动词is + that引导的表语从句结构,但缺少主语。根据上下文的意思,加上 , which做成一个非限定性定语从句,解释前面的economic reforms。
4、What is more, more graduates will promote the development of society. It is a positive cycle as a whole.
改正:the development of society. It——the development of society, which
译文:而且,更多的毕业生有主语社会的发展,这是个良性的循环。
解析:后面小短句中的It指代前面整个句子,可以直接做成前句的非限定性定语从句,地道补充说明的句子。
5、However, how would you react if you will spend twelve years even a long time of your life in a special group what is made up of the same sex?
改正:twelve years even a long time of your life——twelve years or even a long time of your life;what is——that is
译文:然而,如果你人生的12年甚至更长都在一个由同性朋友构成的圈子里成长,你会作何反应?
解析:前面短语缺少表示选择性的连词,用or连接;后面句子应该是that引导的定语从句来修饰a special group。
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