想要取得雅思写作高分并非一日之寒,考生要做的准备还有很多。不管是开头结尾或是主体段都需要考生用心写作。今天,前程百利小编就和大家来谈谈几种写作方法,雅思大作文引言段这样准备天下无敌。
首先,我们来了解大作文的类型。
单边支持/反对;
探讨双方;
陈述利弊;
半支持半反对;
分析解决;
多重选择。
一篇雅思作文主要由三部分组成,即引言段+ 主体段+ 结论段。
接下来,小编就为大家分享一些引言段的写作方法,考生们要多多参考学习。
引言段组成:开头句(Opening sentence)+ 中心论点
步骤:引入话题,同义转述,再根据写作任务表达中心论点。
五种方法:
(一) 引人入胜思路:用一个比较有趣的话题先吊起考官的胃口,并吸引他们往下看。
题目1:
Many schools demand the students to wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality.
范文:The issue of whether the practice of requiring students to wear school uniforms will affect their personality and individuality is of great interest to many people.
备选:
Be of great concern for many parents
引起父母的关注
Be of great importance to many scientists
对科学家来说至关重要
Be of great significance to both A and B
对于A 和B 都是非常重要的
题目2:人类如何定义和追求幸福,这样的问题引起公众广泛的争议。
范文:The question of how human beings can define and pursue happiness is a matter of much contention among the general public .
备选:The question of _____ has been widely debate in the world ofpolitics.
(二) 力排众议
思路:先驳斥大众的某个普遍但却错误的观念,指出其与现实不符,然后提出自己的想法或正确想法,并在主体段列举各种理由、证据以及活生生和例子来论证。
套路:Although it is + 副词+ 过去分词+ that…,this is...
题目1:
The older generations have very traditional ideas about the correct ways of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that these ideas are not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life.
范文1:
Although it is commonly believed that conventional views about a healthy lifestyle and proper conduct are no longer to young people’s needs today, this is actually not the case .
题目2:越来越少人照看年老的亲属,而是把他们送到专业人士那边去。
范文2:Although many people subscribe to the belief that their old relatives can be taken better care of in a nursing home, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. From my point of view, it is the younger family members who should really be responsible for looking after these old people during the rest of their lives.
释义:
① 普遍认为…,但事实并非如下。Although it is commonly believed that, this is actually not the case.
② 许多人认同这样的观点…,但事实上这却是一种我们需要去澄清的普遍错误观念。Although many people subscribe to the belief that ..., this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clearup.
③ 大众观念认为?.,但是现实状况却远比这种观念复杂得多。Although conventional wisdom has it that, the reality of the situation is often far more complicated than that.
释义:subscribe to 订阅、同意、预订conventional wisdom 大众观念
(三) 放眼世界
思路:从“时间”或“地点”的跨度着手,比如:过去怎么样?
题目1:
Some people support the development in agriculture, such as farming industry and the scientific creation of new types of fruit and vegetables.Others oppose this development. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
范文:Recent decades have witnessed a major transformation in agricultural development, where industrial technologies are being employed and new varieties of crops are being created. Yet, opponents of this development have raised anumber of difficult questions. From my opinion of views, this is a really complicated matter, and we need further investigations to understand the bigger picture.
备选:Recent decades have witnessed an increase awareness of
释义:understand the bigger picture 了解事物的全貌
题目2:
With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it isgenerally accepted that families today are not as close they used to be.
范文2:
Divorce and family breakdown were virtually unheard of just 100 years ago.Now,however , almost half of all marriages fail. This phenomenon is symptomaticof the growing distance between family members in modern society.
(四) 兼收并蓄
题目1:谁该为修路付费,个人还是政府?
范文:Some people hold the opinion that the government should make more investments is expanding and improving road systems, whereas others who are not so convinced present the counter argument that it is the responsibility of the growing number of private car users to deal with the huge costs. In my opinion,both sides of the argument have their own reasons, and we need a detailed analysis to get to the root of this controversy.
(五) 异军突起
题目1:谈个人科技的发展与贫富差异.
范文1:
With the huge expansion of high technologies available to individuals, it is sometimes argued that economic and cultural gaps between the rich and poor are being further widened.
题目2:淡大型超市和商场的急剧扩张..
范文2:
With the unprecedented explosion of large supermarkets and shopping malls,a lot of small local shops have quietly disappeared while the remaining ones are struggling for hopeless survival.
释义:unprecedented explosion 前所未有的爆发
范文3:
With the continuous and gradual evolution of mass media, many serious crimes are now described in greater detail on newspapers, television and the Internet, raising considerable public concern over personal safety and socialst ability.
范文4:
With the mass extinction of endangered and rare species, many countries have taken harsh measures against illegal hunting, unregulated dumping of industrial waste and rampant destruction of their natural habitats by human developers.
(六) 抛弃冗长模板
"使用模板,一律四分"的说法或许有些夸张,但也在一定程度上反映了考官对于模板的深恶痛绝。其实模板套句并不是不能用,而是要运用灵活,不留痕迹。在很多文章中,开头结尾的两个复杂到爆炸的长句在通篇简单句和基础语法错误的映衬下格外醒目,这种稍微有些英语知识的人都会识破的小聪明,更不可能逃过考官的眼睛。
建议学生们积累一些简单实用的基本套句,如:
我们的生活已离不开…
We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone).
我们随处都可以看到…/使用…
(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere.
(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere.
…已成为一个不断增长的趋势。
(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend.
There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urbanareas).
越来越多的人选择…/倾向于认为…
More and more people are choosing (to study abroad).
More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits havebeen brought by air travel).
…已经不再罕见
It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equallyimportant role as their male counterparts in various areas).
It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even workingat home).
人们开始意识到…
People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on familyrelationship).
在几十年前,…很少有人会想象到…
Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life wouldhave changed so greatly due to the use of Internet).
(七) 开头具体化
具体化的开头是6分以及6分以上文章的一大特点,即"要让考官觉得你这个开头是完全针对题目写出来的",要做到这一点,就必须紧紧围绕话题展开。
比如下面这道题目:
The development of technology changes the way people interact with each other. In what ways does technology affect the types of relationships people make? Is it a positive or negative development?
(开头段一) As a matter of fact, the issue on the effects of science and technology is a complex and controversial one. Different individuals can hold various opinions due to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer to this question. In some areas, some people believe that technology has brought benefits on people's relationship, in other fields,others mountain that it has some side effects.
(开头段二) It is undeniable that science and technology has played an increasingly important role in modern society. The benefits brought by such trend are obvious, but problems have also been welled up. As for its influences on people's relationship, I believe the advantages brought by technology outweigh its drawbacks.
(开头段三) Even two decades ago, few people could have imagined that we can perform our daily tasks via computer. Now more and more people are choosing to do the shopping, banking and even work online. So how can such trend affect the interactions between modern-day people? I will give my answer in the following essay.
开头段一为典型的模板式开头,废话多,与话题关系小,毫无疑问会引起考官的反感。开头段二虽然也使用了模板句,但运用较灵活,不足之处是背景句没有紧扣话题,虽然谈到科技影响生活但没有具体到'relationship'。开头段三语言虽简单但紧紧围绕话题'relationships'展开,灵活的使用了一些简短的小套句,而这样具体化的开头最受考官青睐。
(八) 简单即是美
雅思作文考的不是文学修养而是学术写作能力,即如何运用语言有效的表达观点证明观点,因此,简单明了的开头会给考官留下效率高的好印象,而且简单的开头段避免了使用模板的嫌疑也节省了时间。
例:
Science and technology have changed people's relationships significantly,which I believe has more benefits than risks.
It is argued that more risks than benefits have been brought by the development of technology on people's relationships. Personally, I can hardlyagree with this opinion.
最后,写作重在练习,所谓熟能生巧,开头段的构思亦是一样。
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