雅思写作高分方法之吸收优秀范文精华分享给考生们，如果考生想要获得高分，优秀范文是不可不用的备考素材，里面会有很多值得借鉴与学习的地方。下面，就和小编一起来了解一下吧。
具体使用步骤有如下三点：
1. 最好准备优质范文的word版，画出自己认识但是写作的时候又想不到用的表达
2. 生词和表达多样性要单独罗列在段落下面，方便总结
3. 翻译成正常的汉语，看着汉语翻译英语(write it down)，对照原文找差异，尤其是好的内容必须会写
下面，为大家实例分析。
1、雅思OG Test1大作文：
题目：Some people work for the same organization all their working life.Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.Discuss boththese views and give your own opinion.
For most people, when they get their first job they have little idea whether or not they will remain in the same organization throughout their working life. If they decide to change, they need to consider how this will impact on their career overall.
对于大多数人来说，当他们有了第一份工作的时候他们不知道他们是否会在同一个公司工作一辈。如果他们决定改变，他们需要考虑这对他们整个职业生涯的影响。
(1) have little idea=have no idea
(2) working for the same organization= remain in the same organization
1. People who stay with the same organization have the advantage of thoroughly understanding how it works and becoming familiar with the staff and processes.
呆在一个公司工作的人会有优势，完全了解公司的运作以及熟悉员工和工作流程。
(1) working for the same organization
= remain in the same organization
= stay with the same organization
2. If they work hard, their promotion prospects are good and there is likely to be greater job security, with the promise of a good pension when they retire.
如果他们努力工作，他们的晋升前景将会非常乐观，很可能有更好的工作稳定性，当他们退休的时候有可观数量的退休金做保障。
3. Employers value loyalty and may offer additional incentives to long-term employees, including bonuses and reward schemes.
雇主非常重视忠诚，并对长期工作的员工提供额外的奖励，比如奖金和奖励机制。
(1) stay with the same organization=loyalty
4. However, one of the drawbacks of staying with the same organization is that the person may get stuck doing the same job year after year.
然而，工作在同一个公司的缺点之一就是这个人可能会受困于年复一年地做着同样的事情。
5. In some cases, this can lead to boredom and disillusionment.
有些时候，这可能会导致无聊并且幻想破灭。
6. Moving from one organization to another can be a strategic decision inorder to have variety and acquire a range of skills and experience.
如果你为了获得更多的可能性和更多的能力和经验，那么从一个公司跳槽到另一个公司就会是一个策略性的决定。
(1) a range of skills and experience
(1) Moving from one organization to another =work for different organizations
7. A friend of my father started out as a sociology teacher, he then joined the Social Services and is currently managing a care home in Western Australia.
(不是特别重要的内容，就不必浪费时间翻译。)
8. This has made him incredibly knowledgeable in a range of related fields and, in my view, has provided him with much more interesting working life.
这使他在相关领域变得非常博学，并且在我看来这也让他体验了有趣的工作生活。
(1) a range of related fields
Although there are benefits to working for one organization, I feel that it is also valuable for an employee to be able to offer a wide range of experience having worked for different companies. As long as it is planned carefully, I feel that change is good and will ultimately benefit the employee and the employer.
(281 words)
(1) ultimately benefit=finally benefit
虽然在一个公司工作会有好处，但是我觉得员工如果有更多的在不同公司工作的经历也是非常有价值的。只要有仔细的计划，我认为改变就是很好的，并且最终会对雇主和雇员都有好处。
2、C6 T1
题目：Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
常规题目，文章结构多样，取决于观点的个数以及观点之间的逻辑关系。具体内容请参见剑6中 7.5分考官范文。
范文参考步骤：
1. 弄清开头段的每一句话的功能
第一句Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets.主题词advertisement交代背景。
第二句Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. 提干观点改写。
第三句This argument may be true.交代作者观点，并暗示下文结构，有同意用不同意。
第四句In my country, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goodsthat their favourite singer advertise, although they do not really need the products. 举例说明广告对年轻人购物的诱导性，但一般我们不建议在开头段举例子，最好放到主体段中去论证，以免本来就不多的例子充实了开头段却冷落了主体段。(注意：该句话中有语法错误，看看聪明的你能否找到并予以改正。)
2. 弄清主体段之间的逻辑关系。
第二段主题句：Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality.
第三段主题句：On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments.
第四段主题句：In addition, as there should be a limited amount of disposable income consumers are able to spend, people try to allocate their budgets.
结尾：In conclusion, as customers have their own strong opinions and standardof good quality goods, it is better to leave them to make their own decision inbuy goods.(又有语法错误咯，聪明的你有没有发觉?)
总之，段落之间的逻辑取决于观点之间的逻辑关系。所以在审题列提纲的部分就应该准备好这些结构上的安排。
3. 弄清段落内部句子之间的逻辑关系。(以also这一段为例)
Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality.As a result of it, people often buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not actually need it but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertising. Furthermore, as many customers buy a particular product due to its advertising campaign, the other people may be affected by the trend,even if the product is not of the real needs of the society.
很多同学在写主体段落的时候也会有意安排一些逻辑连接词，但是不代表有逻辑连接词就一定是有逻辑，而一定是思维流畅的时候逻辑才流畅，逻辑流畅了才会有逻辑连接词。所以要提升表达的逻辑，建议孩子们根据自己的母语，选择论述性比较强的文章，多看多分析，增强自己的逻辑思维能力，之后再训练英语表达能力，也许文章逻辑能更加顺畅一些，而非胡乱堆砌貌合神离的逻辑连接词。
总之，考生要想写出一篇令人称赞的作文来不是那么容易的，不仅要掌握技巧，还要勤加练习，吸收优秀范文中的素材并为之所用，相信一定会有所进步。
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