文化类是雅思大作文考试中常见题材，但是不是每个考生都能完全掌握。如何能在冷门的文化类写作中拿到高分呢?下面，就让我们通过雅思写作文化类7-7.5范文解析一同揭秘高分秘诀。
文化类作文的最常见的话题类型有两种：
1，古代、现代建筑/风俗。即文化中有具体物质形态的问题;包括我们是否应该保护古代建筑和风俗，古现代的建筑优缺点的比较等。
2，语言、艺术文化、现代文化、国际文化(国际旅游)。即文化中比较抽象的问题;具体包括普通话与方言，传统礼仪是否应该被延续，世界文化的融合，跨国旅游发展等。
首先我们要清楚Writing Task 2想测试考生的哪些能力呢?
This task tests your ability to do one or more of the following five points:
1. discuss a problem and present a solution
2. present and justify opinions
3. compare and contrast evidence or opinions
4. argue a case
5. evaluate and challenge ideas, using evidence and arguments
这一部分无论以什么形式出现，主要考查考生对题目的理解和有理有据的论述思想、观点的能力。我们要做的就是convince读者，或者更确切的说是convince雅思考官，你的观点必须强有力。
那么考官考查一篇作文是否优秀会将哪几点作为评分标准呢?
Task response (TR)
Whether all parts of the task are addressed
Whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported.
Cohesion and coherence (CC)
Whether the response has a suitable layout and logical ordering of points
(文章是否条理清晰，行文有逻辑)
Correct and appropriate use of connectives
(是否正确使用衔接词)
Lexical resources (LR)
Range and accuracy of vocabulary (词汇丰富度和准确度)
The correct form and spelling of the words (词汇形式和拼写正确)
Grammatical range and accuracy (GRA)
The range and accuracy of tenses and sentence structure (时态和句式的丰富度和准确度)
下面我们就以一篇范文为例，看看这篇文章是如何达到了考官7.5分的评分标准的。
International tourism is now common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions on this?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
范文：
The past 50 years have seen a considerable increase in global tourism. Despite the undeniable economic prosperity it has brought to many host countries, I would argue that the overall impact of the international holiday making has in fact been negative. Two of the primary drawbacks associated with this trend are as follows.
First of all, global tourism tends to export many negative aspects of western culture. Since it is only the wealthy who can afford to travel abroad, developing countries like Thailand and Indonesia have become the playgrounds of tourists from more affluent ones. In many such nations, this influx of mainly western tourists has brought with it problems such as prostitution as well as alcoholism and drug abuse. Admittedly, international tourism does have the potential to foster greater understanding and tolerance between people of different cultures. However, this is unlikely to occur while it remains such a potent symbol of western cultural domination and moral decadence.
Even more disturbing, though, is the environmental degradation that international tourism has caused in many parts of the world. One particularly salient example of this is the Great Barrier Reef in Australia---the countless boats, divers and snorkelers that have visited the reef over the past few decades have gradually destroyed vast sections of coral. Similarly, world renowned Kuta Beach in Bali has become heavily polluted in recent years. In order to be sustainable, greater regulation of global tourism is required.
In conclusion, the challenges presented by the booming international tourist industry are numerous and complex. Although they are by no means insurmountable, it is highly unlikely that they will be resolved in the foreseeable future.
(273 words)
首先我们先从TR方面分析一下：
Task response (TR)
Whether all parts of the task are addressed
经过审题我们发现这是一个个人观点类的作文，即What are your opinions on this?给出你自己的观点，其要求是Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience，根据自己的知识或经验给出相关的例子。其中如果用自己的知识论证那就是道理论证，如果根据自己的经验来论证那就涉及到了举例论证。
这篇文章中作者选择了道理论证和举例论证相结合，首先在第一段给出了自己的观点，开门见山指出自己一边倒的认为旅游带来的消极影响远远大于积极影响，明确表达自己的观点。下面正文两个论点也从两个方面论证，论点很清晰，最后的结尾段也很清晰不拖沓累赘。这篇文章涵盖了题目要求的所有任务。
Whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported.
其次我们在看看作者表达的观点是否清晰，有说服力：
文章的第一个论点First of all, global tourism tends to export many negative aspects of western culture指出：国际旅游将会出口一些西方消极的影响，那么这一观点怎么具有说服力了呢?在此，作者运用了解释说明，即道理论证，毕竟只有有钱人，才能出国旅游，所以国际旅游的情况大部分是西方国家的人去一些发展中国家旅游，而西方国家的不良嗜好，比如嫖娼，酗酒，吸毒很有可能就带向国际，影响很多发展中国家。
作者写的有理有据，很符合目前的一个国际现象。这是消极方面的一个地方，第二方面则是国际旅游对环境有极大的破坏影响，就这个论点，文章采用了举例论证，作者以澳大利亚的Great Barrier Reef为例，数不清的船只，潜水者，潜水装置破坏了大片水域的珊瑚，顺道又补充一个例子，巴里的Kuta Beach也背深重的污染。这两个分论点，作者一个用了道理论证，一个用了举例论证，有理有据，论点很清晰。
下面我们再来看一下连贯和衔接方面：
Cohesion and coherence (CC)
首先讲一下写作中使用连接词有什么作用：
1. 使得文章框架明晰，逻辑结构合理。
2. 起到承上启下，语篇连贯自然的作用。
3. 使得文章层次分明，结构严谨。
文章中句与句之前的衔接词有：Admittedly (让步的作用) ;However(表转折) ;though(表让步); Similarly(有进一个说明的作用)等，这些词使用的十分准确，并且作用很大，即使句子更加顺畅。
段与段之间的连接词有：First of all, Even more disturbing, In conclusion,这些词在文章中起到了承上启下的作用，作用就是文章过度会更加自然。
接下来，我们从Lexical resources (LR) 分析一下：
这篇文章在词汇方面也发挥的特别好，使用很多的高级词汇，也是文章的增彩之处：
considerable increase 显著增长
undeniable economic prosperity 不可否认的经济繁荣
tends to 倾向于
affluent ones 富裕的一方
alcoholism and drug abuse 酗酒和吸毒
western cultural domination 西方文化主导
moral decadence 道德沦丧
environmental degradation 环境退化
salient 显著的
world renowned 世界著名的
sustainable 可持续的
regulation 规章
booming international tourist industry 国际旅游业蓬勃发展
insurmountable 不能克服的
foreseeable future 可预见的未来
最后，我们从Grammatical range and accuracy (GRA)分析本文的妙处：
在语法方面，这篇文章页显示出来扎实的语法功底，首先第一句就让考官们眼前一亮，The past 50 years have seen a considerable increase in global tourism. 这句话用时间做主语，过去的五十年见证了国际旅游业的显著发展，这是一个很地道的句式，一个好的开始很重要，能给考官留下很好的印象。
其次第二句Despite the undeniable economic prosperity it has brought to many host countries, 这句话用到了倒装句;Since it is only the wealthy who can afford to travel abroad,运用到了强调句;
下一句话Admittedly, international tourism does have the potential to foster greater understanding and tolerance between people of different cultures中的does也是一个简单不容易错却又很实用的强调句手法。Even more disturbing, though, is the environmental degradation… 中的though是插入句;the challenges presented by the booming 中的presented by是被动句。
总之这篇文章句式多样，运用正确，显示了作者强大的语法功底。
最后我们总结一下文章高分的秘籍：
1，要完成题目要求的所有任务，不能题目提到的问题文章没有讨论到。
2，要清晰表达自己的观点，个人观点类的文章就必须给出自己清晰的观点，讨论起来一片倒的比较好写。
3，论点要清晰，论据要有说服力，可以使用道理论证和举例论证。
4，多使用高级的词汇，出彩的亮点词。
5，句式要多样，非谓语，强调句，倒装，插入语，定语从句等等要多使用。
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