论雅思作文开头结尾如何写作?想要取得写作高分没有那么容易，考生只有做好全面的准备方可攻破。下面，就和前程百利小编一起来了解一下吧。
开头段：
1) 抛弃冗长模板
"使用模板，一律四分"的说法或许有些夸张，但也在一定程度上反映了考官对于模板的深恶痛绝。其实模板套句并不是不能用，而是要运用灵活，不留痕迹。在很多文章中，开头结尾的两个复杂到爆炸的长句在通篇简单句和基础语法错误的映衬下格外醒目，这种稍微有些英语知识的人都会识破的小聪明，更不可能逃过考官的眼睛。
建议学生们积累一些简单实用的基本套句，如：
我们的生活已离不开…
We can not imagine our life without (the mobile phone)。
我们随处都可以看到…/使用…
(An increasing use of machines) is now being witnessed everywhere。
(Fast food such as KFC and Mcdonald's)now could be found everywhere。
…已成为一个不断增长的趋势。
(Urbanization) has established itself as a growing trend。
There emerged a growing trend that (people are pouring into urbanareas)。
越来越多的人选择…/倾向于认为…
More and more people are choosing (to study abroad)。
More and more people tend to believe that (more risks than benefits havebeen brought by air travel)。
…已经不再罕见
It is not uncommon to see that (female leaders are playing an equallyimportant role as their male counterparts in various areas)。
It is not uncommon to see (people performing everyday task and even workingat home)。
人们开始意识到…
People are beginning to realize (the side effects of television on familyrelationship)。
在几十年前，…很少有人会想象到…
Several decades ago, few people could have imagined that (our life wouldhave changed so greatly due to the use of Internet)。
2) 开头具体化
具体化的开头是6分以及6分以上文章的一大特点，即"要让考官觉得你这个开头是完全针对题目写出来的"，要做到这一点，就必须紧紧围绕话题展开。
比如下面这道题目：
The development of technology changes the way people interact with eachother. In what ways does technology affect the types of relationships people make? Is it a positive or negative development?
(开头段一) As a matter of fact, the issue on the effects of science and technology is a complex and controversial one. Different individuals can hold various opinions due to their distinct backgrounds, therefore, there is no universal answer to this question. In some areas, some people believe that technology has brought benefits on people's relationship, in other fields, others mountain that it has some side effects.
(开头段二) It is undeniable that science and technology has played an increasingly important role in modern society. The benefits brought by such trend are obvious, but problems have also been welled up. As for its influences on people's relationship, I believe the advantages brought by technology outweigh its drawbacks.
(开头段三) Even two decades ago, few people could have imagined that we can perform our daily tasks via computer. Now more and more people are choosing to do the shopping, banking and even work online. So how can such trend affect the interactions between modern-day people? I will give my answer in the following essay.
开头段一为典型的模板式开头，废话多，与话题关系小，毫无疑问会引起考官的反感。开头段二虽然也使用了模板句，但运用较灵活，不足之处是背景句没有紧扣话题，虽然谈到科技影响生活但没有具体到'relationship'。开头段三语言虽简单但紧紧围绕话题'relationships'展开，灵活的使用了一些简短的小套句，而这样具体化的开头最受考官青睐。
3) 简单即是美
雅思作文考的不是文学修养而是学术写作能力，即如何运用语言有效的表达观点证明观点，因此，简单明了的开头会给考官留下效率高的好印象，而且简单的开头段避免了使用模板的嫌疑也节省了时间。
例：
Science and technology have changed people's relationships significantly, which I believe has more benefits than risks.
It is argued that more risks than benefits have been brought by the development of technology on people's relationships. Personally, I can hardly agree with this opinion.
最后，写作重在练习，所谓熟能生巧，开头段的构思亦是一样。
结尾段：
应该说，中英文在议论文的结尾，还是有些微妙的差别的。雅思作文的结尾往往比开头和主题句还要重要，最起码应避免明显中式表达的痕迹，不必喊口号或者抒情。总的原则是：可以重申全文要点，可以提出具体措施，再加上地道，至少是书面语的措辞，就是一个好的雅思作文结尾!
请看这么一道题及其结尾：
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century. Some people think that preventing these wild animals from dying out is a waste of resource. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
结尾1：
Someone said safeguard of wild animals is a waste of resource, but I do not agree. It seems we would spend some time, wealth and man power on this meaningless thing. Actually we also do this for human being ourselves. let’s protect wild animals right now.
评：
结尾第一句话，是对于考官给出的观点的转述，应放在文章开头就出现。结尾不是申明中心句，而应是对全文观点的总结。大作文要收的坚定有力，seems让文章显得说服力不足，meaningless跟全文观点相孛。最后一句有喊口号的意味，不符合英语议论文的习惯，同样的意思可改换客观平实的文风收尾。
结尾2：
To sum up, we can not live without wild animals due to their profound effects on us. For this reason, we should try our best to protect them. Let’s remember one thing---- protecting wild animals is equivalent to protecting ourselves.
评：
双重否定表示强调，是英语议论文的常见手法,令结尾收的坚定有力。Profound effects深远影响很好地呼应了文中提到过的野生动物保护的意义，令文章浑然一体。作者的观点跟结尾1作者观点完全一样，但采用了平实的陈述口气，并用了书面的地道词汇，equivalent to ,是一个很不错的结尾。
结尾3：
Certainly, our diet cannot be without meat. There are living stocks, which can provide us with sufficient and nutritious produce. Therefore, we need not to resort to wild animals, especially the endangered ones. To protect animals is to protect our living environment. Every individual should join efforts to keep the diversity of animals.
评：
作者不仅会用否定句表达强调，还很及时地采用了让步式的收尾，指出，人当然要吃肉，但有众多家畜，不必杀戮野生动物，尤其是濒危的物种。让步式结尾让文章显的客观公正，符合英语议论文的要求和习惯，总体很有说服力。再加上语言上同样成功，地道的措辞，如，living stocks, sufficient and nutritious, resort to ，endangered ones, join efforts, diversity是一篇8分作文的经典结尾。
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