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那么我们先来进行一下媒体类话题的简介：随着互联网等新兴媒体越来越多，媒体上报道的信息也多种多样，对人们的思维、生活等产生潜移默化的影响。每年大约会出现两次。媒体类话题主要考查媒体对人们生活的影响。涉及到的媒体类话题中的媒体主要包括：电视、报纸、杂志、网络等。涉及到的媒体信息有：广告、暴力色情等信息。
了解了这么多之后，我们就来进行媒体类的满分范文解析。首先我们还是回顾一下大作文的四项评分标准，再从评分标准的每一项来分析满分范文的精彩之处。
Task response (TR):
Whether all parts of the task are addressed
Whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported
要完成大作文的TR一定要完成题目要求，并且要给出清晰的扣题的观点，并进行论证。所以大作文的论证一定要充分并且有效。
Cohesion and coherence (CC)
Whether the response has a suitable layout and logical ordering of points
(文章是否条理清晰，行文有逻辑)
Correct and appropriate use of connectives
(是否正确使用衔接词)
Lexical resources (LR)
Range and accuracy of vocabulary; (词汇丰富度和准确度)
The correct form and spelling of the words (词汇形式和拼写正确)
Grammatical range and accuracy (GRA)
The range and accuracy of tenses and sentence structure (时态和句式的丰富度和准确度)
就让我们带着这四项评分标准来鉴赏这篇范文吧!
题目：
It is said that the amount of violence on the TV programs has negative effect on our social development and therefore should be reduced.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
范文：
With the advent of televisions, the modem society has been being increasingly colourful. They benefit people’s life in many areas, such as communicating. However, a large number of people show great concern about the violence the TV programs. I think the concern does make sense.
Over recent years, there has been an increasing amount of media violence. TV series portray serial kills, gun battles and brutal fighting. News and documentaries illustrate every detail of a starling crime in the name of crime investigation. TV viewers today are so used to violence that they never think it disturbing but find it fun to watch.
Young people and children are the greatest victims of this surge in media violence. Not yet able to distinguish between right and wrong, they often imitate the violence they observe on TV and accept it as the normal way to behave towards others. It is reported that many juvenile crimes are the direct result of viewing aggressive behaviors on TV.
Opponents of strict media control often point out that some of the violence shown on TV is the true portrayal of what is happening around us and people have the rights to know it. Although this is undoubtedly true, it also means that people who see them a lot may gradually develop a sense of insecurity and mistrust as they are forced to believe they are living in a dangerous world.
The violence on screen is contributing to increasing crime rate. As a result, it is high time the governments should combat the threat of media violence to the general public.
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分析：
Task Response (TR) :
首先，我们一同来看一下这篇范文在TR的精彩表现：
Whether all parts of the task are addressed
经过审题我们发现，这篇文章需要我们完成三个任务：
1，是否赞同这个观点;
2，用自己的论据来证明
3，最后的总结段
这是一个媒体类讨论话题，属于我们讲过的个人观点类，即To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 读完首段我们发现首段最后一句话 I think the concern does make sense，其中the concern指的是violence in the TV programs，所以这里作者明确表达了自己观点—认为确实存在暴力的电视节目。
接下的三段从三个方面论证了作者对这一现象的担心，最后还有个简单的总结，并且给出了建议的意见，即政府应该采取措施，总体来说完成了文章题目的要求。
Whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported
再来看看作者的观点是否都论证充分。
作者的第一个观点：Over recent years, there has been an increasing amount of media violence. 即最近几年，我们身边充斥着媒体暴力，那么作者是怎么论证的呢?这里作者使用了举例论证，电视剧、新闻、记录片都具体的展示了暴力的细节。
第二个观点Young people and children are the greatest victims of this surge in media violence年轻人和儿童都是这些暴力媒体的受害者，作者运用了道理论证，青少年没有辨别能力，他们喜欢模仿，电视上的进攻性的行为容易引起青少年犯罪。
第三个论点，作者运用了对比论证，先指出反对者认为暴力表演只是对我们生活的真实描述，但是看多了还是会引起一种不安全和不信任感。
作者的三个观点都展示的非常充分有说服力。
Cohesion and Coherence (CC)
这篇范文在连贯与衔接上也可圈可点。
文章句与句之间的连接词有：
Such as表示举例;however表转折;not yet还不能;although尽管;as a result作为结果等。这些连接词在用法上可以使句子逻辑上连接的更顺畅自然。
段与段之间的连接有:
第一段与第二段直接用了一个“Over recent years,”最近几年，来表明一个在现在社会的一个大背景下，举了一些例子来论证我们身边充斥着媒体暴力。
这里小编提醒大家，大家在写作时候也可以多使用连接词还连接句与句之间，段与段之间的关系，比如：举例用for instance，递进用therefore，表假设的就会用到if等等。
连接词能够是文章读起来更加顺畅更加自然，段与段直接的连接词也会起到承上启下的作用。
Lexical resources (LR)
那么文章在词汇方面又有哪些值得我们学习的呢?
Advent 出现，到来
increasing amount 激增的
media violence 媒体暴力
portray 描绘
News and documentaries 新闻和记录片
starling crime 令人不安的犯罪
surge 激增
distinguish between… and… 区别…和…
juvenile crimes 青少年犯罪
aggressive behaviors 攻击行为
undoubtedly true 毋庸置疑的正确
contributing to 导致
crime rate 犯罪率
Grammar range and accuracy (GRA)
文章在语法方面也做的非常的好：
首先文章开头With the advent of televisions, 这是一大亮点，用到了with结构，吸引了读者的注意。Not yet able to distinguish between right and wrong, they often imitate…Not yet 这是文章的逻辑主语，而正真的主语是后面的they。It is reported that…这是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的that从句，并且还用到了被动。
最后再让小编总结一下一篇好的文章有哪些素质应该具备呢?
1，读懂题目要求，所有的任务都要完成
2，论证要有理有据，可以使用道理论证，举例论证，还有对比论证
3，文章应该尽量多使用连接词，增加句子的流畅度
4，多使用高级词汇，积累媒体类高分词汇
5，语法要多样化，比如加入一些倒装，被动，插入语，强调句等等。
相信做到这些，拿一个高分肯定没问题了!
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