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恰当应用句式,提高雅思写作分数有望

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  本文想要为大家分享的是恰当应用句式,提高雅思写作分数有望!想要取得雅思写作高分,考生怎能让自己的作文还是那么平淡无奇,缺乏韵味呢。通过运用不同的句式,不仅让作文内容更加丰富,也可以吸引考官的注意力,加分也是有可能的。

  形式主语

  (一) 什么是形式主语

  作为形式主语的it并无实际语义,是为满足语法上的需要,避免句子头重脚轻,它代替的是句子的逻辑主语。

  (二) 形式主语it所在的句型类别

  1、作不定式的形式主语

  (1) 句型

  It is + a pity/a pleasure + to do sth.

  It is + wrong/right/wise/cruel/naughty/selfish + of sb. + to do sth.

  It is + necessary/hard/important/difficult/possible/common + for sb. + todo sth.

  (2) 雅思范文写作实例

  A. Beyond this, it is also of paramount importance to use theaters and museums as the “social classroom” of culture and history education.

  B. I think it is by no means pointless, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. (Cambridge 3, P162, Task 2)

  C. It is difficult to say who has the right to judge whether children working is “wrong” or “valuable”. (Cambridge 3, P164, Task 2)

  D. …, it is important to remember that children need to develop skills other than intellectual ones, and …(Cambridge 3, P168, Task 2)

  E. Finally, I think that it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work, …(Cambridge 3, P168, Task 2)

  F. Because people interpret happiness for themselves in so many different ways, it is difficult to give ang definition that is true for everyone.(Cambridge 4, P165, Task 2)

  G. It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break for studying after graduation from high school. (Cambridge 5, P165, Task2)

  H. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job, or to do sth completely different from from a university course. (Cambridge 5, P165,Task 2)

  据本人统计,剑桥官方的雅思真题(剑3—剑8)几乎每一篇Task2考官范文中,都有所使用,甚至在有的文章中出现三次之多。

  (3) 学生写作实例

  实例1:Many people, if not most, are strong believer in the claim that regard children go to work as completely wrong, while others hold the opposite opinion.

  修改建议:it is completely wrong for children to go to work.

  实例2:They have to complete their homework conscientiously within limited time and difficult to discover the problems in studies.

  修改建议:thus it is difficult to discover their problems in study.

  实例3:College graduates are difficult to find jobs.

  修改建议:It is difficult for college graduates to find jobs.

  实例4:Parents realise the needs of their children is extremely important.

  修改建议:It is extremely important for parents to realise the needs of their children.

  It is extremely important that parents realise the needs of their children.

  2、作动名词的形式主语

  (1) 句型

  It is + (no) use/good/useless/a waste of time/energy/efforts + doingsth.

  It is + good/useless/hard/foolish/enjoyable/worthwhile + doing sth.

  (2) 雅思范文写作实例

  A. For instance, children usually pay attention to match their clothing and toys; in fact, it is really worth competing thing that their study is being ignored.

  B. Some parents believe that it is no use having second education for their kids.

  (3)学生作文实例

  实例:Particular countries and individuals deals with environmental issues are no use.

  修改建议:It is no use dealing with environmental issues by particular countries and indivuduals.

  3、作主语从句的形式主语

  (1) 句型

  It is + (adj) n./(adv.) adj./(adv.)v-ed + that……

  It + seems/happens/appears/matters//strikes/occurs(突然想起) + that……

  It is + said/reported/believed/(universally/widely)accepted/announced/estimated/acknowledged + that……

  It + must be admitted/stressed out + that…/It + cannot be denied +that….../It + can be foreseen + that……

  It + goes without saying + that…

  (2) 雅思范文实例

  A. It is an understandable fact that many employers may prefer to use the services of children simply to save money by paying them less than adults and itis this type of exploitation that should be discouraged. (Cambridge 3, P164, Task2)

  B. Admittedly, it is common sense that a person without cooperative spirit will be difficult to survive in the modern society.

  C. Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people. (Cambridge 6, P168,Task 2)

  D. It is clear from the data given that there are some significant differences in spending habits in Europe. (Cambridge 3, P161, Task 1)

  E. It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.

  F. Take holding an Olympic games as an example, it is no doubt it will take millions of money to build stadiums.

  G. A more dramatic rise is predicted between 2030 and 2040 in Japan, bywhich time it is thought that the proportion of elderly people will be similar in the three countries. (Cambridge 5, P162, Task 1)

  H. It seems that the experiences we have in life are so unpredictable and so powerful, that they can boost or overide other influences, …(Cambridge 5,P169, Task 2)

  (3) 学生写作实例

  实例1:It is quite obvious/evident/apparent that the quantity of families whotends to go outside and infuse fresh oxygen into their lungs is growingsteadily.

  实例2:It is universally acknowledged that the best way to arouse people’slove to our nature, who has devoted herself too much to human being’s development while has received barely anything till now, is to let them see the beauty of hers by themselves.

  实例3:Clearly, rush hours emerges in the early morning as well as (in the)early evening which is most busy/the busiest in a day as a whole in London.

  修改建议:这个句子的结构应该是无可厚非的(语法就不说啦),但是按照雅思评分的标准,句式稍微做一下调整,会更漂亮:如:It is clear thatrush hours emerge in the early morning as well as in the early evening which is most busy/the busiest in a day as a whole in London.或者改成It is demonstrated that rush hours emerge in the early morning as well as in the early evening which ismost busy/the busiest in a day as a whole in London. 这样一个小小的调整,其句子修改前后的效果是显而易见的。

  (三) it作形式主语的特征分析

  根据以上对it作形式主语的句型结构的解析,对雅思写作范文、尤其是官方考官范文的分析,以及对学生写作过程中出现的it使用状况的详细解读可知:相比较于名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句的复杂性和多边性,it作为形式主语的句式结构可谓简明扼要,学生掌握起来应该说是得心应手的。

  (四) 不能正确使用it形式主语的原因

  在信息编排时,英语句子遵循“end focus”的原则,即旧信息在前,新信息在后“old information+new information”;但是,当句子主语结构较长,容易使句子产生“head weight”的感觉时,句子结构则遵循“endweight”的原则,即,把较长的主语全部置于句子尾部。前面空掉的主语位置用it来代替,担当形式主语的功能。

  而汉语并不具有这类明显的特征,学生对英汉两种语言结构差异知之甚少,或者略有所知,在真正的运用中,也未必能够正确的体现出来。多数学生都本着汉语式的思维,一遇到“某人做某事是怎么样的/是什么”就习惯性地写成sb.+ is/are +adj./n. + to do sth.

  使用“with”的好处和应该注意的事项:

  ① 好处:a. 表顺承意义:伴随、因果、条件等。b. 不受语法上前后主谓一致的限制。

  ② 注意事项:a. “with”后面用名词或动名词。b. “with”结构可以和主句有逻辑关系。

  不要总用“主动语态”,英语中“被动语态”的使用频率更高。

  ⑴ Governments all over the world are making great efforts to protect environment.

  改:Great efforts are being made to protect environment by governments all over the world.

  ⑵ More and more people agree (realize/ accept/ are aware) that women should enjoy full equality with men.

  改:It is increasingly agreed (realized/ accepted) that women should enjoy full equality with men.

  ⑶ This society still makes women unable to enjoy equal right to pay and promotion.

  改:Women are still denied the equal right to pay and promotion.

  (deny sb. sth./ deny sth. to sb.: 不准某人获得某物或做某事)

  ⑴ 例句

  ① 所有的学生都穿校服会极大地提升学校的形象。

  With all the students wearing (wear) uniforms together, it will be a great boost to the image of the school.

  ② 那样的传统服装由现代人穿在身上,做着现代人的事情,那些服装所承载的文化价值只会被减少而不是被提升。

  With such traditional clothes worn (wear) by modern people doing (do)modern jobs, the cultural values carried (carry) by these clothes would be reduced rather than enhanced.

  ③ 然而,这并不意味着由父母双亲给孩子提供精神支持和榜样的传统家庭不是最令人满意的抚养子女的形式。

  However, this does not mean that the traditional families, with both parents providing (provide) emotional support and role models for their children is not the most satisfactory way of bring up (raising/ rearing) children.

  ④ 虽然不意味着所有的旧技术都必然有价值,但我觉得,无论如何,它们都不会是毫无意义的。

  Without suggesting(suggest)that all the old technologies are necessarily valuable, I think they are by no means (绝对不会) pointless, in any case/ at anyrate.(无论如何).

  ⑤ 学校D在标尺的另一端,在那个年龄组有8%的学生抽烟。

  School D is on the other end of the scare, with 8% of the students in that age group smoking (smoke).

  ⑥ 接下来就是Sri Lanka, 全体工作人中有37%是女性。

  Next comes (come) Sri Lanka, with 37% of the total workforce being (be)women.

  ⑦ 非洲, 亚洲和拉丁美洲的发展中国家在1975年经历了最显著的城市增长率,其中,非洲有大约每年5%的增长率,拉丁美洲刚超过4%,亚洲刚超过3%。

  The developing countries of Africa, Asia and Latin America experienced the most dramatic urban growth rate in 1975, with Africa having (have) around 5% perannum, Latin America just over (over) 4%, and Asia over (over) 3%.

  ⑧ X是最大的生产者,其产量占总产量的45%。

  X was the largest producer, with 45% of the total production.

  ⑨ 在1999年,中国是世界上最大的水稻生产国,产量几乎有193百万吨。

  In 1999, China was the greatest producer of rice, with nearly 193 million tons.

  建议考生在雅思学习中,采取步步为营的四步走战略战术,循序渐进:首先,记住句型结构;其次,模仿写作;之后,进行独立创作;最后,形成属于自己的模板句型。作为雅思写作学习中可控制的因素,我们可以培养句式运用的习惯,使习惯称为自然。为了我们雅思的学习这个努力是值得的,it pays in the long run.

  以上就是恰当应用句式,提高雅思写作分数有望的详细介绍,考生在平时要巩固语法知识,学会灵活运用不用句式表达,让作文更加出色。希望考生朋友们考出满意的雅思成绩,更多雅思备考经验我们将会陆续为大家更新,欢迎咨询我们的热线电话400-890-6000。

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