今天，前程百利小编为大家从雅思写作评分标准角度剖析社会类满分范文，想要取得雅思写作高分的话考生不妨来学习一下，相信会对你的备考带来很大的帮助。
首先，我们来了解一下雅思写作评分标准的内容。
概括而言，包括以下几点：
1、Task achievement / response(任务完成情况/任务回应情况)
任务完成/回应情况包括内容否切题，立场是否鲜明并得到有效阐释，结构是否有逻辑性三个方面。
2、Coherence and Cohesion (连贯与衔接)
文章的连贯性主要体现在段落与段落之间，句子与句子之间。段落之间的“启”、“承”、“转”、“合”可通过表顺序的过渡词完成，因此，考生要掌握一定的词汇。
3、Lexical resource (词汇资源)
词汇的多少并不能决定文章的好坏，但用词的精准性是可以加分的。一般来说词汇的准确表达可以通过两个方面达到，一是在用词的难度上拔高，二是在近义词的多种表达上提升。
4、Grammatical range and accuracy (语法结构的范围以及准确性)
句子的好坏主要取决于句子结构的准确性和丰富性，句子的长度和复杂性以及用语的逻辑性和正式性。
其次，我们从写作评分标准角度分析一下社会类作文满分是如何取得的。
社会类题材介绍：
是雅思各类话题写作中涵盖面最广泛的一类写作，也是出题频率较高的一类题目，其话题涉及衣，食，住，行的各个方面。想要突破此类题材，考生就要对此类题材有所掌握。下面，我们看看具体题目以及范文解析吧。
例题：
Fast food is now universally available in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are your opinions on this?
Task Response的精彩表现：
题目任务是：1，对于这个快餐消极和积极方面给出自己的一个观点; 2，给出具体的例子或者自己的知识来论证; 3，至少写250个字。
本题是一个个人观点类的话题。在首段，作者开门见山指出in this easy I intend to argue that this kind of food is detrimental both to the individuals that consume it and to society at large，即作者观点是快餐对消费者及整个社会都是有害的。第二段及第三段，作者用大段篇幅来证明自己观点，并且还有一个总结段。而且整篇文章的篇幅是288，完成了第二项和第三项的任务。
那么文章在表达观点上是否有充分的说服力呢?
看第二段我们不难发现作者的第一个观点是it is an undeniable fact that consuming fast food to excess results in serious health problems，即过度食用快餐会导致严重的健康问题。那文章是怎么来论证这个观点的呢? 作者第一个论点论证的时候运用了道理论证，鞭辟入里的讲到炸鸡，汉堡，薯片这样的快餐含有高脂肪高盐量会导致高血压，肥胖病以及心脏病。第二个论点作者写道快餐产业链有意识的吸引儿童并且塑造了他们将来的饮食习惯，并且使用了举例论证，以麦当劳为例，麦当劳餐厅采取一系列措施，让年轻人形成一种习惯。非常的具体形象的例子让读者更加信服!
在连贯程度上的表现：
第一段中句与句直接的连接词有however，表示转折; 第二段中有moreover进一步说; in other words换句话说;though尽管等等;这些连接词连接上下句，可以使句子更加的通顺。
在Lexical resources方面的表现：
本文的词汇使用上很到位，也很丰富，值得考生借鉴学习。
比如：
Dramatic increase 急速增加
Availability 可利用性
Laud 赞美
Undeniable fact 不可否认的事实
Ailment 疾病
Affordable 买得起的
Deliberately 故意地
Fast food chain 快餐产业链
As the pace of 跟随步伐
Warranted 有保证的
这些都是有很亮点的加分词汇，可以给自己的文章增光。
在Grammar range and accuracy上的表现：
开头的第一句话就是一个很地道的表达：The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the availability of fast food. 用时间做主语，过去的50年见证了快餐的快速发展，达到了主语多样性的一个作用。其次it is an undeniable fact that consuming fast…放在了第二段开头，很巧妙的把好的句式放在很显眼的地方。这句话中it is… 这里是一个形式主语，真正的主句是后面的that从句。
范文分享：
The past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in the availability of fast food. Some laud its convenience and relatively low cost; however, in this easy I intend to argue that this kind of food is detrimental both to the individuals that consume it and to society at large. There are two primary reasons for this.
First of all, it is an undeniable fact that consuming fast food to excess results in serious health problems. Food such as fried chicken, hamburgers and chips---which are incredibly high in fat and salt---are responsible for such ailments as high blood pressure, obesity and heart disease. Moreover, although I certainly agree that fast food is both affordable and convenient, the cost and inconvenience of treating the illness it causes in later life are significant. In other words, while fast food is beneficial in the short term, its long-term effects are generally negative.
Further and even more importantly, though, some fast food chains deliberately attempt to attract children in order to shape their future eating habits. One particularly good example of this is the character Ronald McDonald---the bright clothes and smile of the McDonalds clown are a beacon to children. Having grown up eating in McDonalds restaurants, people are likely to continue eating there throughout their adult lives. It is also interesting to note that McDonalds provides playgrounds and frequently holds children’s birthday parties in order to attract young children and their parents.
By way of conclusion, I believe that fast food will continue to become more popular as the pace of this increases. Give the health risks associated with this trend; I believe that public education campaigns warning people about the dangers of fast food would be warranted.
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