雅思写作一直是很多中国烤鸭都头疼的问题，感觉做了很多努力，却依然拿不到高分。希望这篇雅思写作备考为什么低分可以提高大家的写作水平。
1. 词汇量少，运用能力不佳
雅思写作中有一项评分为lexical resources，表示词汇量和词汇运用能力。很多烤鸭写作分数不高就是因为在写作中用的词汇很简单基础，只能表示一个大概的意思。当然，有时候可能写了一些高级词汇，但是却用得不准确，不地道，也拿不到高分。
比如说，我们就写一段环境保护措施的方法，可能有的同学用词就会非常简单：There were three main way to protect our environment. Our government could make some laws to protect environment. People should understand the significance of the environmental protection since they were little. Our society should develop the environmental science & technology rapidly to reduce the pollution.
这段话用词很简单，还有重复性的词汇，比如说protect the environment、should，整个看起来没有丝毫亮点，如果我们用一些高级词汇来代替一些简单词汇，加上一些修饰性的词汇，看看会有什么效果?
As far as I can see，there were three main way to protect our fragile environment . Our government could try to legislate a national environmental protection strategy against polluting. Everyone in the world should be brought up to comprehend the significance of the environmental protection. Our society have the responsibility to develop the environmental science & technology rapidly to reduce the pollution. 这些红字部分是不是增加了词汇的丰富性呢，表达的准确性呢?
2. 语法经常出错
雅思写作评分标准中有一项就是Grammar range & accuracy，语法的丰富性和准确性。如果文章出现了一些明显的语法错误或者整个文章的语法结构比较单一，考官会倾向于给出低分。我们看上面经过词汇添加的句子，有一些非常明显的语法错误，比如说时态错误，单复数错误、冠词错误，我们现在将用蓝色字体将错误改正出来，并且丰富一下句子的结构，结果如下：
As far as I can see，there are three main ways which can protect and improve our fragile environment rapidly and efficiently. Our government can try to legislate a national environmental protection strategy against polluting. Everyone in the world should be brought up to comprehend the significance of the environmental protection. It’s the society’s responsibility to inspire and speed the creativity in the environmental science & technology.是不是感觉句子结构就丰富了一些呢?
3. 审题不准确：雅思写作考试中，还有一项评分标准就是take response对应题目要求。考试中，经常会有同学因为不认识题目中的词汇、或者抓住题目中的重点关键词而导致写跑题或者偏题，拿不到高分。
比如说：Nowadays, people always throw old things away and buy new things, whereas in the past, old things were repaired and used again. What factors cause this phenomenon? What effects does the phenomenon lead to? 这是一个report类的写作，需要对目前的这种现象进行介绍、然后对比以前，分析现在这种现象产生的原因，最后就是这种现象的影响就行分析比较，最后简单总结一下即可。
4. 逻辑不清晰：雅思写作最后一个评分标准就是coherence & cohesion连贯性和逻辑性。如果整篇文章逻辑不清或者句子不连贯，就很难让别人快速理解你想要表达的意思或抓住重点。还是看上面的例子，我们在添加了词汇、丰富了句式之后，会发现句子之间的关系没有表示出来。我们将改动的部分标黄，大家看一下效果：
As far as I can see，there are three main ways which can protect and improve our fragile environment rapidly and efficiently. First，our government can try to legislate a national environmental protection strategy against polluting. Second，everyone in the world should be brought up to comprehend the significance of the environmental protection. Last but not least，It’s the society’s responsibility to inspire and speed the creativity in the environmental science & technology.
上面就是对雅思写作为何低分的一些简单分享，将最初简单的句子，经过丰富词汇、添加复杂句式、添加连接词，连贯句子等方式改写成了一个比较好的文章段落，同学们可以参考一下这些经验，希望大家的雅思分数可以快速提升。
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