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实例分析雅思写作范文的学习

信息来源:网络  发布时间:2016-02-15

  如今,很多考生把雅思写作范文当作是救命稻草一样,然而,只有在正确使用的前提下,这颗救命稻草才会发挥功效。本文前程百利小编就为大家实例分析雅思写作范文的学习,希望考生能够从中有所收获。

  如何学习范文?又该从范文中学习什么?这是考生一定要弄清楚的问题。学习范文,考生要从五个步骤入手,包括审题,列提纲,逐句阅读范文,总结段落词句,模仿范文写作。通过范文的学习,考生要能够从中吸取对自己有帮助的养分,如文章写作的观点思路,文章的段落结构安排,作文中的衔接连贯应用,句式以及词汇的使用,吸取之后要能够学以致用,以便应用到自己的作文当中,让自己的作文大放光彩。

  接下来,就以一篇范文为例,为大家简单讲解。

  Many people keep a dog or cat or some other kind of pet in their homes. Although there is some expense involved in terms of good food and medical treatment, there are still many benefits to keeping a pet.(Although引导让步状语从句)

  本段观点清晰,首句是一句背景句,指出很多人在家养宠物。下一句指出虽让养宠物会涉及一些食物和治疗,但是养宠物还是有很多好处的。也就是本文的观点是同意养宠物。

  First of all, pets are good companions. This is especially importantly for people who live alone and for older people who do not go out much. (定语从句)Some pets can also help to protect the house from burglars. Second, dogs and cats like to play and can give hours of fun to children and adults. Children can also learn to be responsible when taking care of an animal, and it also helps them to be more mature and reliable. Finally, the actual expense of feeding pets is not that high as they can eat the leftovers(剩余物; 残羹剩菜) form family meals. (as引导原因状语从句)

  本段为主体段之一,从正方展开论述,强调的是宠物是人类的伙伴,尤其是对于那些孤独的人和不常出去的老人而言。另外,宠物也可以保护家免遭小偷盗窃。而且,养宠物的成本也不是很高,因为它们会解决掉剩饭剩菜。

  Some people claim that keeping pets is not hygienic(卫生的,保健的; 清洁的;). I do not think this is necessarily true. Responsible pet owners keep their pets clean and healthy so they do not smell bad. People also say that certain pets, such as large dogs(插入语), can be dangerous. Indeed there have been cases of dogs attacking and seriously injuring children. However, these attacks are rare, and are often the result of irresponsible owners who either do not train their dogs properly or actually train them to be aggressive. (However引导让步状语从句)So, the issue of pets being unclean or dangerous is in fact often created by the owners, not the pets themselves.

  本段为主体段之二,从反面反驳养宠物危险和不卫生的观点。指出养宠物危险或是不卫生的主要因素不在于宠物本身,而是养宠物的人是否做好一切工作。如果养宠物的人是负责的,那么就不会出现此类问题。

  To sum up, there are some benefits than drawbacks to keeping a pet, especially for elderly people and children. In most cases therefore the cost is justified(有正当理由的,合理的; 事出有因的).

  结尾段与首段相呼应,再次重申观点。

  整篇文章中可供考生学习的地方有多处,如连贯充分,包括Although,First of all ,also,Second,Finally,However,To sum up等等;句式使用丰富多样,如让步状语从句,定语从句等等;词汇使用地道,准确,如involve,be more mature and reliable,justified等。

  以上就是实例分析雅思写作范文的学习的详细内容,范文的学习不是在短时间内就能大有突破的,考生还需静下心来慢慢学习,这样才能有所突破。相信考生会通过自己的努力取得满意雅思成绩,更多雅思备考经验我们将会陆续为大家更新。

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