在现实生活中,我们会时常听到或看到有关于犯罪方面的新闻。这些内容,大家或多或少都会关注,但也许了解的不多。不过,当这类话题出现在雅思写作考试中,考生就需要用心准备了,因为这类话题对于很多考生而言并不熟悉,想要拿高分势必会有些难度。因此,本文前程百利小编就为大家浅谈雅思大作文犯罪话题,可供参考。
首先,我们通过几个历年的真题来看看犯罪话题具体有哪些方面的内容。
080112考题:Some people think the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentence. Others,however,think there are better alternative ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(一些人认为减少犯罪的最好的办法是判刑更长,然而其他人认为还有其他的方法减少犯罪,讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。)
080816考题:Detailed descriptions of crimes are often given in the newspaper or on TV. Some people think it has bad consequences on the society and so should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (犯罪的细节描述经常出现在报纸电视上。一些人认为对社会有消极影响所以应该被限制。多大程度同意不同意? )
090613考题:After criminals are set free, some of them continue to commit crimes. Why do you think this is the case? Provide solutions.(有些罪犯被释放后继续犯罪。为什么?怎么解决? )
090917考题:Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However,others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (一些人认为犯罪的人应该被送进监狱。然而其他人认为应该给这些罪犯中的一些优秀人才工作机会。讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。)
091107考题:The rate of crime committed by teenagers is increasing throughout the world. Discuss the possible reasons and give suggestions on how to solve the problem. (年轻人的犯罪率在全球范围内都在上升。讨论可能的原因并给出解决方法。)
121103考题:Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (很多人不敢出门因为害怕罪犯。一些人相信应该采取更多的措施去防止犯罪,但是其他人认为根本没用。讨论双方观点并给出自己的看法。)
131109考题:Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (犯重罪的年轻人应该受到和成年人一样的处罚。多大程度同意还是不同意? )
140607考题:Some people believe that if a police force carries a gun, it will encourage higher levels of violence in the whole society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (一些人认为如果警察携带枪支,会促使暴力的增加。多大程度同意还是不同意? )
150808考题:Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students the danger committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree? (一些人认为刑满释放的人已经成为好的公民以后,是教育孩子犯罪危害的最好人选。同意与否? )
综上所述,犯罪话题一般会涉及以下几个方面,即降低犯罪率的方法,曝光犯罪细节,二次犯罪,青少年犯罪,犯罪的原因,警察携枪等等。
由于雅思大作文考试对于论点以及论据的提出有一定的要求,若不合理或是片面的话,就称不上是一篇好的作文了,分数也不会高了。事实上,在日常生活中,犯罪这类话题很少接触的人是太懂的,更何况在作文中还要提出自己的观点并去论证,让考官觉得这是有说服力的。
而且,上面这些话题看似简单,有些题目感觉也很相似,但是想要写好文章着实不易。所以,考生在平时要广泛阅读,丰富相关话题的背景知识,这样才能有话可说。
下面,就以150808考题为例为大家讲解犯罪类话题雅思大作文如何写。
由于题目中有绝对词,所以写作思路通常是先承认其可取之处,然后再提出其他的方法,也就是说明题目中所提到的做法并不是最好的方式。那么,文章结构就可以划分为五段,即:
首段是导入话题,表达立场,即不同意。
主体段有二,其一是承认以身说法,比传统课堂更加有说服力,其二是指出现实生活中学生可能会对罪犯有歧视心理,同时其他方法也能够起到教育作用,如警察叔叔给予一定的影响,因为他们会更懂得犯罪的严重性,以及有更强的号召力去让学生们加强意识,防止犯罪;另外,父母是孩子的第一个老师,应该时刻教育孩子要明辨是非。
结尾段是总结自己的观点。
针对该题目的大体思路已经形成,但也只是写作前的准备工作,关键还是要懂得如何合理组织语言,如何恰当,有逻辑性,灵活的应用语言,从而表达出自己所想。这就要求考生在平时多多积累素材,加强语言组织与语言应用能力,从而提高作文质量,赢得高分。
素材放送:
ex-prisoners 前囚犯
raise the awareness of
ex-prisoners play a vital role in cutting youth crime
have a fear towards criminals
policemen can become the active voice in reducing juvenile delinquency
realize the consequence of the irresponsible behavior deeply and discipline themselves strictly
parents can certainly be the first to help children learn the differences between right and wrong
以上就是浅谈雅思大作文犯罪话题的相关内容,希望能够给考生的备考带来帮助,也希望考生做足准备,以便迎送应战,拿下高分。
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