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雅思写作技巧之深度解构地道英语(2)

信息来源:网络  发布时间:2016-04-01

  本文百利天下小编为大家带来雅思写作技巧之深度解构地道英语(2),希望通过本文与上一篇文章的讲解,考生能够从中有所收获。

  (接上文)

  第四部分:怎样地道表达?

  但有的同学发现英文表达不出来,或者缺乏准确地道。我们可以看看老外是怎么表达的,但是网上的信息浩如烟海,找到了文章,也难以找到我想要的具体表达。这该怎么办?

  在这里介绍一个方法:把上面的内容,精炼成简单的话,越简单也好,如下:

  1.文化 2.工作经验 3.独立生活。接下来搜索“gap year+culture”或者“gap year+ culture”,相关的文章就会出现很多。再带着找“例子”和“好处”的目标去搜索定位相关的段落和句子。按照这样方法,我很快找到了有关gap year的具体例子及好处。

  接下来,你要做的不是全盘使用老外的表达,而是在自己已有观点及尝试翻译后的基础上,发现外国人的不同表达并做记录。实在没有观点,则可作观点补充之用。

  结合搜集的地道表达,按照“具体+结果”的思路于是变成了:

  1. 文化

  例子: explore different cultures, customs and beliefs through traveling. For example, British and Arabian people have different attitudes towards time.

  结果: expand one’s horizons.

  2. 工作

  例子:try an internship or a short term placement in a particular job that may arouse their passion.

  结果: reflect on their interests and goals

  3. 独立生活

  例子:learn how to cope with challenges which they have not encountered in the academic environment,such as making a living and juggling different tasks in daily lives

  结果:become more emotionally mature

  再借鉴之前总结的一些因果连接词,很自然地就变成了如下段落:

  Firstly, in a gap year, these young people may explore different cultures, customs and beliefs through traveling. For example, British and Arabian people have different attitudes towards time.This will help them expand horizons and embrace different ideas. Secondly, they are very likely totry an internship or a short-term placement in a particular job that may arouse their passion. This has the added benefit of reflecting on their interests and goals. Last but not least, Taking a year off provides young people with the opportunities to learn how to cope with challenges which they have not encountered in the academic environment,such as making a living and juggling different tasks in daily lives. As a result, they will become more emotionally mature.

  第五部分:怎样短时间内做到将雅思写作话题全面覆盖?

  需要提醒的是以上展示的只是解构外国人写作的一种方法,有效的论证搭配方法远不止“具体+结果”一种, 雅思写作的话题远不止间隔年。所以在该方法的试用下,有很多的内容可挖出来,鉴于篇幅考虑,就不一一展开。

  用以上方法可,有在较短时间攻克大作文600多道题目。举个例子,把现象提炼成本质的观点来准备:文化,工作,独立生活的好处、坏处等,就能做到以不变应万变。如旅游题目可联系文化,建筑题目跟文化相关,还比如刚写的间隔年等等。总之题目的具体表象是不同的,但是概念是不变的。

  尝试按照上面的方法做以下的题目,你是否发现了共性?

  1. Today, more and more full time university students focus on other activities rather than spend a lot of time studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  2. It is better for students to live away from home while studying at university than living with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  3. Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  总之,想要写出地道正宗的作文来不是件易事,考生可以在平时多加练习,查漏补缺。衷心希望考生可以通过自己的努力最终取得满意的分数,实现自己的理想

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