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SAT写作词汇的使用技巧

信息来源:网络  发布时间:2015-05-16

  下我们给大家整理的是SAT写作词汇的使用技巧,希望对大家有所帮助。

  1、Original: Bill Gates gives a definite answer that college education does count.

  Revised: Bill Gates gave a definitive answer: college education does count.

  Definite意思是“明确的”、“一定的”,指意思明确,不会误解;definitive也是“明确”的意思,但往往指“权威性、最后决定的”。此话出自比尔·盖茨之口,体现权威性,故将definite改为definitive。

  2、Original: …people may attend a university or college for various reasons...

  Revised: …people attend university or college for a multitude of reasons...

  此处将various改为短语a multitude of更为正式,体现人们读大学的原因很多。

  3、Original: The kinds of education that we got on school are formal and intense ones...

  Revised: The kinds of education that we receive at school is formal and of tentimes very intense.

  不必用kinds of education,直接用education(教育)即可;“受教育”不同get,改为receive;“在学校”不必用at school;把one去掉,用oftentimes very intense指出学校教育常常是非常严格的。

  4、Original: They can foster their interests in some fields to make life more colorful and meaningful.

  Revised: They can even pick up hobbies to make life more colorful and enjoyable.

  Foster their interests是“培养兴趣”,此处用pick uphobbies(开始各种各样的兴趣)更为合适;不同的兴趣是我们生活的调味剂,使我们的生活多姿多彩,乐趣无穷,把meaningful换成enjoyable,与colorful搭配更合适。

  5、Original: Needless to say, more employment means more income andless idle life, so that people can enjoy a better life and makeinvestment in their future.

  Revised: Needless to say, more employment means income and less idletime, so that people can enjoy a better life and invest in their ownfutures.

  把idle life改为idle time更为合适,表示“闲散时间”;makeinvestment可改为动词invest,与and前的动词enjoy词性一致;人们各自有自己的未来,故将in theirfuture改为in their own futures。

  6、Original: Another important factor that contributes to the extension of life expectancy is the development of medical science.

  Revised: Another imortant factor that contributes to the rise in life expectancy is the development of medical science.

  “人的寿命的延长”可以表示为life extension,但是如果用life expectancy,则要用the increast of 或the rise in life expectancy。

  以上就是SAT写作词汇的使用技巧,各位考生在备考中多多参考,预祝大家取得理想的SAT考试成绩。

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