托福写作中最容易造成低分的原因除了长篇大论和简词繁用以外，还要很多细节问题影响到文章的整体表达，结合这么多年在教育行业的经历，总结发现了十五类托福写作常见错误，这十类错误可大可小，总之是造成写作低分的原因之一。
错误一 用词不当
Even I don‘t speak Spanish， I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.用词错误或在此种情况下该词不是最佳用词。
错误二 单词形式不当
I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.所使用的单词的形式不正确。检查一下应该使用该词的名词、形容词或副词形式的哪一种。
错误三 时态错误
Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.动词时态不正确。检查一下是应该用现在时、过去时、将来时还是完成时等等。
错误四 指代不明
If people do not speak the same language， it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.代词所指代的指示词（介词所代替的名词）不清楚。
错误五 重复冗余
Personally，I believe what the newspaper prints.一种意思的表述不止一次，或者某个词语不必要。
错误六 结构不平行
I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
错误七 介词多余
I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US，I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class， my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因而不能在它们前面添加介词。
错误八 过于笼统
We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse.句子或它所表达的意思过于笼统，不能提供多少信息。
错误九 标点问题
I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.这是一个非常普遍的问题!许多学生在句子中使用了太多的句号，尤其是当他们用手写的时候。
错误十 语气与文章不符
I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris，London，Tokyo， and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.语气与文章其他部分不相符， 可能是过于正式或者太不正式。
错误十一 句子不完整
Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example， my friend in high school.句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。
错误十二 单数/复数
Many year ago， dinosaur roamed the Earths.单词需要从单数变为复数，或者由复数变成单数。单数可数名词不能单独使用，应该将其变为复数形式或者加上限定词（a，the，my， his，her，Gary"s，no，any，1，3，50，most等等）。
托错误十三 拼写错误
I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基本结构有问题，缺少主语、动词或宾语，或者这些成分重复。
错误十四 跑题或不相关
There are many reasons to buy a car， preferably a nice car. 这个意思与文章的主题无关。
错误十五 书写难以辨认，信息不正确
I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.传的信息不正确，或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确（如果确实是正确的，应当解释为什么这样，因为读者不认为是正确的）。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百;我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见，应当使用many或most.非英语单词Computers are very helpful and advantageable.尽管看起来象个单词，其实不是，至少不是个英文单词。使用这个单词的另一种形式。
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