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托福口语练习要点:让句子形象化、可视化

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  为了更形象化的帮助大家了解优秀的托福口语 句子,前程百利小编和大家通过例题讲解托福口语资料的优缺点,通过对不足之处以及怎样提高进行分析,将托福口语优秀的句子形象化、可视化。希望这则托福口语练习要点可以帮助大家在考试中取得好成绩!

  例题:

  Choose a place you go to often that is important to you and explain why it is important. Please include specific details in your explanation.

  Answer:

  The most important place to me is library. I like reading very much. In library I can read books I want, novels, science books, even history books. The knowledge I want is prepared to me.

  解析:

  (1) Original: In library I can read books I want, novels, science books, even history books.

  Revised:In library I can read books I want, such as, novels, science books,even history books.

  这样会使句子过渡衔接地更加自然,此外,such as它非常口语化,在口语中使用正合适,但是在写作中则不要使用为妙。

  (2)深层次陈述问题方面的欠缺。

  从上面的scripts中可以看得出他在全方位地支撑论点方面还有提升的空间。

  其实他还可以从study, rest, date这几个分支来阐述。具体可以这样表述:Sometimes I can study there. Because it is a very quiet place; it is also a good place for me to take a rest. I can relax in the library. As nobody bothers me there; moreover, the library provides a wonderful environment for lovers to have a date.很明显添加这些内容之后,整个陈述就显得很完整了!

  以上就是前程百利小编要和大家分享的托福口语练习要点,希望可以帮助大家提升备考能力!如果想了解更多备考资料,欢迎登陆前程百利论坛,最后预祝每一位考生都能考出好成绩。

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