雅思写作结论段的展开
无论是辩论式题型的折中式结论还是一边倒的结论以及报告式题型的结论,结论段的功能多数包括下列三个方面:明确观点;重申要点;提出建议。考生可以根据实际情况掌握全部写出还是只强调其中的两点,并不一定非要把全部的三点功能都涉及到。
1) 明确观点,考生最好在结论段用明确的语言直接回答题目中的问题。避免在写出结论前过多阐述无关的内容,这一点在写辩论式作文的结论段时尤其重要。如:
I agree that there should be some restrictions on advertising, but it should not be banned. (Topic: Whether advertising should be banned.)
我同意广告应该被限制,但不应该禁止。(原题:是否应该禁止广告。)
Based on the reasons presented above, I believe that the pros of space exploration outweigh the cons. (Topic: Whether the advantages of space exploration overshadow the disadvantages.)
基于上述理由,我认为太空探索利大于弊。(原题:太空探索是否利大于弊。)
From the above discussion, we can easily draw the conclusion that, while overseas study has its drawbacks, the advantages are obvious. (Topic: What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?)
从上文的讨论中我们可以得出结论,尽管出国留学有其缺陷,但它的优点依然明显。(原题:出国留学的利与弊)。
In conclusion, although smoking may have its own benefits, I firmly believe that laws should be set up to ban it completely. (Topic: Whether laws should be set up to ban smoking completely.)
作为结论,尽管吸烟也许有其优点,我坚决认为应该制定法律完全禁止吸烟。(原题:是否应该制定法律严格禁止吸烟)
To sum up, there might be an element of truth on both sides.
总之,双方观点也许都有其正确的一面。
To conclude, the unemployment of college graduates is attributable to multiple factors. (Topic: the causes and solutions of the difficulties for college graduates to find jobs)
总之,大学毕业生事业问题可以归因于多种原因。(原题:高校毕业生就业难的原因与解决方法。)
In one nutshell, multifold factors contribute to the problem of juvenile delinquency. (Topic: the cause and solution of juvenile delinquency)
总之,多重原因导致了青少年犯罪问题。(原题:青少年犯罪的原因与解决方法。)
2) 重申要点:在结论段的第二部分可以用简短的语言讲前面主体段中的主要观点重申一遍,以加重结论的说服力。为避免结论部分过于冗长啰嗦,这部分可以只复述结论支持的那一方的观点要点或者在“原因+解决办法”的报告式题型中只复述解决办法。
例如:
I agree that there should be some restrictions on advertising, but it should not be banned. It can boost economic growth, benefit consumers and add color to people’s lives. (……它能够推动经济增长,使消费者获益,并且为人们的生活增添色彩。)
——只复述一方要点
Based on the reasons presented above, I believe that the pros of space exploration outweigh the cons. While it might be a little costly and hold up the growth of other industries, it is still well worth doing for the sake of accelerated scientific development, the economic benefits and the spiritual inspiration it brings about. (…尽管太空探索有可能会花费巨大且可能拖慢其他产业的发展,但是为了快速的科技发展、经济上的好处以及给人们带来的精神上的激励,探索太空依然是值得的。)
——复述双方要点
To conclude, the unemployment of college graduates is attributable to multiple factors. Measures including government’s efforts to create more job opportunities, the adaption of college education to the needs of job market and the graduates holding realistic job expectation are all necessary in solving or at least alleviating the situation. (…… 包括政府创造更多的就业机会、大学根据市场需求调整课程设置以及毕业生抱有合理的工作预期都是解决或者至少减轻这一问题的必要手段。 )
——只复述解决办法
3) 提出建议:可以在文章结结尾根据讨论的内容适当提出一句话的建议。
例如:
Therefore, people should make sure that false ads are eliminated and true ones are retained. (因此人们应该确保清除虚假广告并保留真实的广告)
Accordingly, people should enjoy the benefits of the research of the universe while sparing no effort to minimize the adverse of it. (因此,人们应该在享受太空探索的好处的同时尽一切努力把它的负面影响降至最低。)
In other words, the authorities, the education institutes and graduates themselves should all do their part. (换句话说,政府、教育机构以及毕业生本人都应尽自己的努力。)

