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托福写作改进50句范例下

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  托福写作改进50句范例,一些简单的句子,改一下就可以化平庸为神奇,希望考生能够从中吸取一些有用的知识。
 

  26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
 

  改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
 

  27. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
 

  改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
 

  28. What's about nonsmokers?
 

  改进: What about nonsmokers?
 

  29. Why not to be a non-smoker?
 

  改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
 

  30. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
 

  改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
 

  31. I am not good at maths,but English
 

  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
 

  32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children's leisure time?
 

  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time?
 

  33.It is children who clear about their interests.
 

  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
 

  34. I agree the latter idea.
 

  改进: I agree with the latter idea.
 

  35. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
 

  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
 

  36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
 

  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
 

  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
 

  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
 

  38. No one knows all the things.
 

  改进: No one knows everything.
 

  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
 

  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
 

  40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.
 

  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
 

  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.
 

  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.
 

  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
 

  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
 

  43. They will learn the bad habits.
 

  改进: They will develop bad habits.
 

  44. In this continued process, people make progress.
 

  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
 

  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
 

  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
 

  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
 

  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
 

  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
 

  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
 

  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
 

  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
 

  49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.
 

  改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.
 

  50. I felt alone.
 

  改进: I felt lonely.
 

  托福写作改进50句范例,希望各位考生能够从这些细小的例子中找到一些方法,提高和改善自己的写作水平。
 

  

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