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托福写作规范及实例解析

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  托福写作要想取得高分,必须要有清晰的结构和严格的规范标准,在此前程百利考试小编为考生介绍一下托福写作规范及实例解析,希望对考生有所帮助。
 

  正文部分每段安排:
 

  1~3 行 主题句
 

  4~8 行 细节论述
 

  1~2 行 主题再现
 

  主题句的要求:
 

  1、要有概括性:
 

  Eg -. When I work in daytime, other people are also working, so I can workmore efficiently.
 

  Eg +. Outside environment during daytime helps to promote efficiency inmany ways.
 

  解说: TS 一定要概括, 不要写成反例那样那么细节, 不然后面的话不好展开了。
 

  2、避免绝对化:
 

  Eg -. Elder people are efficient.
 

  Eg +. Compared with many un-experienced young people, most experiencedelders can work more efficiently.
 

  解说:正例表述得体,尺度很好,有限定成分“most”,有对比说法“compared with”等。
 

  3、避免语法和用词错误。
 

  细节论述部分:
 

  1、个人事例推广到一般:(图书馆有钱该买书还是买电脑)
 

  During the last semester, all the twenty students of my class are requiredto resort to the British Encyclopedia to complete our final paper.
 

  However, there was only one set in the whole library because it takes awhole shelf to hold and is too expensive to purchase more than one set. Eversince the university bought in the CD version of the British Encyclopedia, weare free to refer to the same article at the same time through differentterminals.
 

  This case is not rare, in reality, frequently many readers of the libraryneed to refer to the same source at the sametime.
 

  2、反例:(still 图书馆)
 

  Paper books in the library circulate very fast. Frequently we find a goodbook lose its good shape within 3 months. Those seldom-borrowed books are notsafe at all, in danger ofnatural erosion and worm bites.
 

  解说:不好说电脑好存放的时候,就说书不好存放。
 

  举反例要适可而止,不能指望全篇用反例来支撑自己的观点。
 

  3、具体数据和引用权威:
 

  想得4分以上必须注意, 因为4分要求说服力,5分要求appropriate examples
 

  Eg.My hometown used to have one million acres of forests. The town peopleare shortsighted as to sell trees for $10 per piece. Trees are sold at a rate ofapproximately 100 thousand pieces per year, according to the data from thegovernment.
 

  Professor Selephant from Peking University, one of the bestuniversities in Environmental Engineering, once said, the tress in my hometown will disappear within 10 years at thisspeed of lumbering.
 

  倒数第二段让步:
 

  Eg.Admittedly, books do have certain advantages over computers. They areeasier to carry with, lower in unit price, and more energy efficient given thatcomputers are driven by electrical power.
 

  However, computers have more valuable merits as an efficient, durable,manageable means for libraries of the new century. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose computers as my final choice for the investment.
 

  解说:让步之后一定记得重申,anyway 我还是坚持……观点。
 

  以上就是前程百利考试小编为考生介绍的托福写作规范及实例解析,希望对考生有所帮助,考生也可以登录前程百利论坛了解更多出国考试资讯,最后预祝考生取得满意的成绩。
 

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