和所有备考托福的小伙伴一样,前程百利小编也一直在备考托福考试。但是,小编还在工作,根本就没有足够的时间专注于备考。但是,幸好小编的工作和托福是息息相关的,这样就可以在工作中积累托福写作经验和方法,并且还可以把自己学到的知识,经验和学习方法分享给大家。
今天,小编就分享给大家一个备考托福独立写作的好方法:学习范文和思路。既然,自己写思路和范文那么难,质量也不高,不如学习别人优秀的作文。小编搜集了很多满分作文,不仅有写作思路,还有范文解析。让我们开拓思维的同时,还会在不断积累学习的基础上,了解常用的写作套路,写作开头,转折段落,结尾段的写作方式以及如何使自己的写作思路得到有力的论证。这样是不是有一种让别人帮你写作的感觉呢?是的,学习了这些方法和思路,你就可以在考试中,信手拈来,毫不费力。
因此,接下来,我们就一起学习一下优秀的范文,写作思路和别人精彩的话语吧!小编列举一些托福考试常考的话题。
范文学习:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The environmental protection efforts of many countries are generally having little or no effect in terms of environmental improvement.
Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
题目讲到许多国家在环境保护方面的努力,几乎对环境改善没有任何作用。因为题目是Do you agree or disagree……,所以,正反两个方面论证都是可以的。但是,首先要考虑,你选择的方向是否有足够的证据可以论证自己的论点。托福独立写作除了需要漂亮的辞藻,还需要是自己的内容充分,最主要的是能用自己的论点论据说服别人。
那么,如果是从同意题目的观点出发,可以提出哪些论点,又有什么可以支撑论点的论据呢。下面看一下,思路是怎么形成的:
分论点1
国际合作不力。
一些国际会议环境协议无法达成共识,每个国家的国情不同,利弊关系不同。所以,很难达到一致的意见。
分论点2
达成共识的环保协议等得不到执行。
环境保护说起来容易,做起来难。不是一蹴而就的事情,环境保护还要得到大多数人的支持和配合才行。而有时,在保护环境的时候,就要舍弃一些经济利益,这是大多数人面临的问题。
分论点3
对破坏环境及协议执行不力的行为没有惩罚措施。
环境保护虽然说是有益于子孙后代的事情,但是一直是处于支持和倡导的层面上。存在的许多破坏,污染环境的事情和个人,他们的行为并没有受到惩罚,这也是为什么问题一直得不到解决的问题所在。
以上三条思路,有理有据,并且有详细充足的论据,足以支撑一篇作文。
下面看一篇满分作文,欣赏和学习一下,别人是怎么写作的。
Environmental issues are a longstanding topic. But recently, some people, especially environmentalists, have started to complain that environmental situations haven’t been improved despite special attention from so many countries. As far as I am concerned, I cannot agree more with these people. This should attribute to the following reasons:
First of all, cooperation on environmental protection is inadequate both domestically and internationally. Take international cooperation on environmental issues as an example. Leaders of different countries get together to address environmental issues, but in most cases, the result is that no consensus can be reached. A typical example is the United Nations Climate Change Conference in 2009 (COP15), in which the ultimate aim was to make the 192 countries present to sign the Copenhagen Accord. However, at last, this agreement was not passed unanimously, let alone the implementation of related measures and penalties exerted on those parties who failed to execute it.
In addition, even if some agreement is reached on environmental issues, implementation measures seldom follow. This is largely because many agreements do not contain any legally binding commitments. For instance, the government once promulgated laws to prohibit the use of ultra-thin plastic bags. However, non-biodegradable waste is still pervasive in the city and the countryside alike. Restaurants, supermarkets, and convenience shops just turn a blind eye to this plastic-bag ban, making these non-biodegradable pollutants a big problem for the environment treatment.
Last but not least, there are no penalties for individuals, companies or even countries who fail to implement these environmental regulations, agreements or laws. Take many communities in my city as an example, the government has enacted laws of garbage classification, but still many people throw garbage into wrong dustbin either intentionally or unintentionally. The absence of a penalty for this behavior has created a huge burden for environmental protection workers.
In conclusion, paying attention to environmental problems is far from enough. Domestic and international cooperation, the implementation of environment agreements, and penalties for violators are of great significance to the improvement of our environment. However, it is because these methods are ignored that the environment situation remains in such a state.
这篇满分范文中出现了很多高级词汇和句子,下面一起来学习一下吧!
(1)闪光词汇:
长期的 longstanding
共识 consensus
一致地 unanimously
执行 n. implementation v.implement
有法律约束力的 legally binding
颁布 promulgate
超薄塑料袋 ultra-thin plastic bag
不能生物降解的 non-biodegradable
无处不在的 pervasive
熟视无睹 turn a blind eye to
这些单词是不是给小伙伴增色不少啊,所以,积累一定的词汇量还是很有必要的。积累词汇固然很重要,下面这些漂亮的句子也是不容忽视。
(2)闪光句子:
1范文原句
However, at last, this agreement was not passed unanimously, let alone the implementation of related measures and penalties exerted on those parties who fail to execute it.
let alone 表示“更不用说”,可以跟名词/动词
例如:I dare not look at myself in the mirror, let alone hold out my hand to shake hands with others.
2范文原句
Restaurants, supermarkets, or convenience shops just turn a blind eye to this law, making these non-biodegradable pollutants a big problem for the environment.
turn a blind eye to 熟视无睹
例如:I don't think any government would turn a blind eye to such criminal act of violence.
3范文原句
Restaurants, supermarkets, or convenience shops just turn a blind eye to this law, making these non-biodegradable pollutants a big problem for the environment.
making现在分词短语作结果状语
类似用法:The snow lasted a week,resulting in a serious traffic confusion in the whole area.
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