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托福写作只需把思路“串起来”

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2015-03-28

  托福写作看似无迹可循,实则有迹可踪。托福独立写作部分的写作其实都是大同小异,仅仅是题目要求不同,但是写作思路是可以“串起来的”,那么,如何把托福写作思路串起来,构成一篇文章呢?今天,前程百利小编就和大家一起来学习一下。
 

  下面是一篇独立写作题目:
 

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statements:

  If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, will you use e-mail/text messaging or use telephone/voice-messaging?

  Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
 

  题目讨论的话题是“如果需要和别人讨论令人不安或有争议性的事情时,是选择通过电子邮件或者短信息的形式,还是打电话,或者语音联系呢?”
 

  首先注意到,题目中讨论的问题是比较有争议的。那么在面对有争议的问题时,我们往往会难以控制自己的情绪或者说话偏激。那么,在这种情况下,通过电子邮件或者书写的方式,可以更好的解决此类问题。所以,小编选择从前者的角度出发。
 

  总论点

  如果需要讨论令人不安或有争议性的问题时,选择通过电子邮件后者书写的方式沟通。
 

  分论点1

  书写的方式可以让人保持冷静,能把问题说得更清楚。
 

  分论点2

  书写的方式较为间接,可以让人更容易地把令人不安或有争议性的问题说出来。
 

  例子:我在初中的时候有一个问题让我很不安,但又不好意思直接告诉老师,于是采取了写纸条的方式,结果老师也通过同样的方式帮我解决了困难。
 

  分论点3

  书写的方式更为正式,可以引起更多的注意,也能使问题得到更快的解决或达成一致协议。
 

  从上面的写作思路出发,如何构思一篇优秀的作文呢?下面一起来看一下,根据提纲中列出的论点论据,我们是如何“串成”一篇作文。
 

  Generally, when expressing views or discussing certain affairs, we are given several selections, including paper letters, e-mails, text messages, face-to-face meetings, online chats, and phone calls, to name just a few. However, when it comes to confronting upsetting or controversial problems, they might as well consider the effectiveness of each method. As for me, I would surely choose the e-mail or text messaging.
 

  根据写作的基本框架,第一段,明确提出自己的观点。当然,在提出自己的观点之前,首先可以做一下铺垫,简单介绍一下题目要讨论的问题是什么。
 

  2-4段一般是文章的主干段,包括论点和论据,以及适当的段落转折和连接。
 

  First of all, one can keep calm and state the problems more clearly by using e-mail or text-messaging. As is widely known, it is usually the case that one is prone to be in a comparatively worse mood when he or she has some upsetting or controversial problems to solve. So in this case, he or she often can’t keep his or her temper when speaking directly with others, thus making things worse. However, it is much easier for people to keep calm and to tell the problems objectively and clearly if they choose to use e-mail or text-messaging since they need to form the general outline before starting to write.
 

  根据分论点1,这一段论述了“书写的方式可以让人保持冷静,能把问题说得更清楚”。然后,进行详细的说明。
 

  Second, many people will feel embarrassed or awkward to share annoying issues directly. Writing problems down, however, is a more indirect means to vent one’s feelings. For instance, when I was in junior school, I encountered a very upsetting problem. Since I would have been nervous and uncomfortable if I’d told my teacher directly, I finally chose to let her know by writing her a note. Delightedly, my teacher helped me clear away my problem by writing a reply. Therefore, in this aspect, the written form was a much easier and more comfortable way to let one to tell the problems.
 

  根据分论点2,这一段论述了“书写的方式较为间接,可以让人更容易地把令人不安或有争议性的问题说出来。”
 

  Last but not least, if upsetting or controversial problems are let out in a written way, they can draw more attention from people, contributing to make such matters dealt with more quickly. Written forms are usually considered more formal, so if problems are told in this way, they have probably escalated to a state of emergency. Besides, recipients of e-mails and text-messages will pay more attention to written problems and try their best to lend a hand as soon as possible.
 

  根据分论点3,这一段论述了“书写的方式更为正式,可以引起更多的注意,也能使问题得到更快的解决或达成一致协议。”
 

  If using e-mail/text messaging can contribute to make people at ease and to solve upsetting and controversial problems effectively, why don’t we take this choice?
 

  最后一段,重申自己的观点,加强语气。
 

  小伙伴们有没有发现,根据前面的写作思路,只需要简单的将每一个论点、分论点以及对应的论据串接在文章中,一篇作文就完成了。这样,作文不仅具有严谨的逻辑性,而且还能让人对你的观点一目了然,有没有很酷啊!
 

  小伙伴们如果想要了解更多关于写作思路和范文之间的串接关系。可以关注前程百利论坛的独立写作题库。不仅包括历年写作真题,还有详细的写作思路和优秀的范文哦!
 

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