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新托福写作真经4-test1综合写作解析

信息来源:运维  发布时间:2015-05-29

  新托福写作真经4收录了24套新托福写作试题。每套试题都包括综合写作和独立写作两个部分。综合写作提供了阅读材料和听力讲座的笔记要点、精彩转述以及实用范文。另外,文章的笔记后面还罗列了本篇文章中的重点词汇和短语,供学生在提高写作能力的同时,增加词汇储备。并且托福综合写作中常用到的万能语句,前程百利小编也给大家整理出来。所以,此类问题,大家只要掌握了后面的万能语句,那么托福综合写作就全了。下面大家就和前程百利小编一起来学习吧!

  Reading & Listening

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  In the early twentieth century, many explorers were vying to reach the North Pole. Several subsequently claimed to have reached their objective, which has made the question of who got there first somewhat controversial. One explorer, American Robert E. Peary, made the best case for having reached the North Pole by an overland route on April 9,1909,however, since his claim is supported by a variety of evidence.

  When Peary returned from his trip to the Arctic, he learned that another explorer, Fredrick Cook, was claiming to have reached the North Pole the previous year. Peary submitted his evidence to the National Geographic Society, a highly respected organization. After a close examination of his records, the society concluded that Peary had reached the North Pole while Cook had not.

  In his report, Peary stated that it took him approximately thirty-seven days to reach the North Pole from his last base camp. Many Arctic experts believe that was much too fast considering the harsh conditions Peary endured on his trek. However, in 2005, another explorer, Tom Avery, repeated Peary’s journey. His team used replicas of 1909 dogsleds and mirrored the conditions Peary faced as best as they could. Avery's team reached the North Pole in just under thirty-seven days, which proved Peary’s claim was valid.

  Peary himself was a skilled navigator and took many sightings as he traveled, so he was cognizant of when he reached the North Pole. He also took some photographs while there. By examining sun’s position in the sky and the length of the shadows on the ice on the dates when the photos were taken, experts at the National Geographic Society determined that Peary was indeed standing at the North Pole when he took those photographs.

  阅读要点:

  观点:美国一名探险家提出最有力的证据,证明自己在1909年4月9日,经过长途跋涉到达北极,并且给出几条证据。

  1. Peary在提交美国国家地理学会的证明中提到自己经过37天的长途跋涉到达北极,但是许多极地专家认为在那样恶劣的条件下,时间太短了。但是,2005年另一只探索队,通过相同的路线和交通工具,经过不到37天的时间到达北极,这一事件证明Peary的说法是有效的。

  2.Peary 在北极拍摄的照片,经过检测太阳的位置以及极地冰面的影子长度,证明peary真的到达过北极。

  Listening

  听力笔记符号:
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  听力要点:

  观点:很多专家都不相信Peary到达过北极,并且给出几条证据。

  1. Peary提交美国地理学会的证明是无效的,因为检测Peary的证据的美国地理学会人员是他的朋友。此外,在Peary向社会捐赠了很多钱之后,并且美国地理学会只用了2天就快速给出结论。

  2.虽然2005年另外一支探险队用时更少,但是由于天气和雪橇工具的不同,不能够有力的证明Peary到大多北极。

  3.因为相机有不同的焦距,所以转变焦距就可以拍摄出使太阳和影子呈现出不同的位置和长度,所以,这一点也是不科学的。

  范文分析:

  ①The lecturer argues that many experts are not convinced that Robert E. Peary was the first person to successfully reach the North Pole. ②This directly refutes the reading passage’s claim that there are many pieces of evidence to verify the assertion.

  First, Peary’s claim is invalid in that examiners at the National Geographic Society were his fellows. Furthermore, he made a lot of donations to the society. Thus, the inspectors rushed through his records in only two days before determining that Peary was the first explorer at the North Pole. ③This contradicts the reading passage’s claim that Peary's records were examined deliberately and approved by the society.

  ④Next, the lecturer contends that Peary's navigation records are not persuasive in upholding his argument. As he was the only skilled member in the expedition, there was no one to corroborate his presence at the North Pole. Moreover, different weather conditions and the weight of the sled loads make Avery's repeated journey not exactly the same as Peary’s expedition. ⑤This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that experts were skeptical that Peary's journey took only 37 days until Avery repeated it in less time.

  Finally, using varying lenses on a camera could produce the effect of different shadow lengths on the ice. Since the camera could mount six different lenses that could show dissimilar images, the photographic evidence is unreliable. This contradicts the reading passage’s claim that his pictures showing the sun’s position and the length of shadows led the National Geographic Society to assert that Peary truly got himself to the North Pole.

  范文中的单词:

  refute[ri'fjʊt]vt.反驳,驳斥;驳倒

  invalid[ɪn'vælɪd]adj.无效的;有病的;残废的

  contend[kən'tɛnd]vi.竞争;奋斗;斗争;争论

  corroborate[kə'rɑbəret]vt.证实;使坚固

  范文中可以提取出来作为模板的

  1. The lecturer argues that……

  2. This directly refutes the reading passage’s claim that……

  3. This contradicts the reading passage’s claim that……

  4. Next, the lecturer contends that……

  5. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that……

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