很多同学反映我关于写作说得不够清楚，如果还有疑问的请看以下内容：如何自改作文以及模板要求，如何判定优秀独立写作标准，给大家介绍一些托福写作模版；有时候我们都会遇到写了作文没人改的情况，介绍一下自己怎么修改自己的作文。最后，就是把前程百利小编的托福高分经验分享给大家了。
1. 检查TS是否和主题紧紧相关，points 是否明确，清晰。
2. 检查有无重大语言错误
1)subject-verb disagreement 主谓不一致
2)verb forms 动词形式
3)run-on sentence
Eg: some people prefer to live in he countryside, (while or whereas)others like to stay in the city.
4)Fragment 破碎句
Eg: Many people think highly of wealth, (though) wealth does not necessary mean happiness.
5) Dangling participle
Eg: In order to pass TPEFL, persistence and diligence are needed. -> we need persistence and diligence
3. 读一遍坚持句子是否地道
往往翻译成中文越理所应当得越得检查看是否符合英文思维习惯。
微观量化自己的独立写作：
10：十句自己满意的句子
5：不能超过五个无法错误，尤其段首
10：十个左右的从句或者经典句型
高分秘籍
词汇要求：Academic, precise and native
Phrases, idioms, conversation, figure of speech
E.g.: Human beings have a long history to harness wind.
Harness：马具-> 驾驭->利用
语法要求：minor mistakes; syntactic variety
Organization: displays unity; progression and coherence
Idea development: using examples and details to drive ideas homes. example 需要完整，说服力强
关于模版
写作初期，可以参照高分模版
写了10篇左右，一定要有自己的模版
写了15篇左右，脱离模版
30分钟可以完成500词左右的，选用五段论
30分钟可以完成380词左右的，选用四段论
独立写作模版参考
Sample one(适用于有一些背景or有一个中心词而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况(二选一，agree or disagree,除了个别)：
On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景)，XX(中心词) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很简单的一句背景 , However, people (universities, government, citizen, society, government,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/ can’t help wondering:改写题目1.Confucian (Yu Qiuyu, Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has insightfully commented, “___编____”I cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this question:改写题目2.
Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾,且如果字数够了这一句就不要).
要做的：想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目
Sample two：(如果sample one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure time，就用下面的)
On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景))/ On account of …，XX(中心词) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in… /XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很简单的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also). However，when it comes to the choice between AA and BB/When asked about whether改写题目1, people get into a dilemma. According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改写题目2.以下最后决定怎样写：Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly…(3).
要做的：想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起(最后写)
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